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for The Beast Awakens...

by Vyncent

person Anonymouse
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great fic
person maniacmusician
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally awesome, had me laughing the whole time. unique too.....:D
person Jasmine
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious. I didn't know Sesshomaru could be a sex teacher. CONTINUE!
person J
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is too freaking cute!! I don't want to cry but your not giving me much of a choice her. AWWWWWWEEEEEE!! To damn freaking cute!! Thanks for posting it. Again!!
person Asher
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW CAN YOU MAKE THIS A ONE-SHOT?!?! IT SHOULD BE MORE! IT WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN AND INTIGUING AND NOW I HAPPEN TO BE HOOKED....AND IT'S A ONE-SHOT!

man that sucks.....I was so hoping for more,
Anyway well done, very well done.
person Fallon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... that's just too increadibly cute... all through it I just kept thinking the beast is like a little kid, and the other part was teaching him. Just toooo cute! This isn't just a one-shot right? You'll post more, right? Ah, and will the rest of the story be in that sort of point of view? Or will it change perhaps to a different character, or maybe just change all together? Augh, you have to post up more!!!
person lurker
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
neeee, soooooo, cute~ makes ya wanna glomp sesshoumaru~ ah, but I have to say, you've made a bit of an error... you used the word "tenchi" for angel, but it's suppose to be "tenshi" aside from that, everything was absolutely fabulous~ I very much look forward to the next installment, should there be one(which there'd better beXD)
person panda
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sigh
person Diane
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I'd love to see at least 1 more chapter from Kagome's POV & possibly a morning after chapter sooner or later.
person Cassie
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please another chapter no one shot please more more really good more please