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Jen...what can I say? Again, wow. Wow. This chap blowed my mind...so erotic and sweet and wonderfully written...so here I am kissing your ass again :) Girl you are so freaking talented...one day, one day I'll be like you...::wistful look:: And did you see? ::jumps up and down:: I was actually Nominated too! I never knew about this until Scherezade told me! I'm so flattered and I still can't believe it! Anyway...I just wish I could say more in my reviews other than how talented you are and how much I LOVE this story and all your stories!!! But if I started telling you Everything I loved about this chap (and the whole story for that matter) I'd never finish...there isn't a single thing wrong with it!
I'm so glad it was a false alarm about your grandfather...I hope things are ok with you...all my love goes to you, Jen. I hope my email didn't offend you, I hope it helped a bit...email me if you feel like it, ok? Like I said, you can always count on This Youkai Musashi. I wanted to email this to you, not put it in the review...but it just came out and here it is. Also I don't mean to be a bother. I wish I could do more for you...all I can do is be there :) You always have my support, as a fan and hopefully a friend :) Also, is it awful of me to ask you to email me with some suggestions about chap 8? I realise it was rushed...want to edit it, make it as good as I can...I know I can never measure up to you or Scherezade...if you have the time and it's not too much to ask, would that be ok? I love you girl!
Your fics are amazing, you are amazing and I'm honored you would even take your time to read my fic...I hope this wasn't too demanding or anything, I didn't mean it to sound that way...send all my love to your family (especially the little one :) ) and as always all my love to you. You deserve happiness more than anyone I know. Hugs love and ramen! YM.
PS: Did I mention this story is absolutely Perfect??? Did I? Did I? Let me say it again...it's absolutely Perfect! Want more! :)

omg when i read when inuyasha sed will u marry me kagome i gasped this is the best story ever and u deserve alot of credit for this *sigh* i wish this was in the episodes this would b a relli good movie 4 inu/kag *claps* u r a relli good writer and i hope 2 c a update soon *gives you inuyasha movie 2 and inu plush*

Ja-Ne!

ps. u spelled ashiteru wrong lol jus 2 let u kno

another great chapter. This chapter was so sweet. It's great that they finally worked everything out and now all they have to do is go through with it. It's good to have you back. I hope your week wasn't too horrible and that everyone is ok.

The author's note was great and I'm glad your grandpa doesn't have cancer. I'm glad you're able to vent through your story and feel free to do it as much as you like.

that had to be the best uh... pre-mating of inuand kag i have ever read! fluffy to the max but still pure inuyasha! and thanks for the shout out, i'm a small person so i thrive on the little things. i think is awesome that you are willing to shore your self with complete strangers! we as human beings should be more trustful and friendly to others. you can always consider me as a friend!

well, i have to say, the fluff is good. (the kami saw the fluff, and was proud) you did a wonderful job depicting a very poetic and moving end to the relationship of kikyo and inuyasha (hate the pairing, love what you've done with it!). i also think that the fluff was just beautiful between kagome and inuyasha. not to mention, the seductive bathing they shared with one another. (i would loe to take a bath with the two of them so long as they washed my back... ^.~)

a few mistakes that i noticed though, kikyo's soul skimmers are shinidama-chuu. and i love you is aishiteru. there was one more, but obviously it wasn't that important or i would remember it here at the review stage, ne? other than that, this was a wonderful chapter and i really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter with the lemon.

tell me he's going to be a little rough with her. please? i mean, he was sweet and loving and kind and beautiful in this chapter, but i think i need more from him than that. especially if the mating ritual binds all of them, mind, body, and soul than there should be a little roughness, ne? and way to go kagome! (the horny little miko!)

okay, now that i've written you a novel, i enjoyed the chapter and i look forward to more from you!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

and hey, what do you mean when you say it's far from over? give me more! (begging here)

Hmmmm no hug or praise from me, i've reviewed u before on fanfic.net and I don't even get a measly thank you, hmph, maybe next time i won't review your stories anymore! Hahahaha I can imagine your face right now 0_0* Icant believe this, she is totally a spoiled brat*. To tell u the truth i m not i really luved your story and everything I read the first 29 chapters in two days. It was really good, you get my vote at the fanguild awards I hope ya win on that joint, anyway congrats im thinking ur story is almost done and if u want to learn a lil bit bout me go to my bio on fanfiction.net, i am one ghetto ass girl. P.s will there b a sequel?


Ja Ne, ur biggest fan* even though i dont really review on this site*
Dark Slayer

It was a really sweet chappy!!!!!!!
You make me see them in my mind, it was wonderful description.
The next chappy is a lemon!!!!!! *drools*

Thanks for sharing.

Chio

That was a wonderful chapter. It is the first time that I have read a fic in which Kagome's life was not extended, but Inu's shortened. I did not get impatient. Seuric helps keep us occupied. :-) Quality is worth the wait and you give us quality work. Plus, I've been busy working on a new fic.

I too have found friends here. Their stories and reviews helped dull the pain of a kidney tumor and they didn't complain much when the work was sloppy. The kidney has been removed and I'm editing right now fixing the errors made by AFF's database corruption and adding more detail. The months of waiting for a diagnosis and surgery would have been much worse were it not for the wonderful people on this site. I don't know that they will ever realize their worth.

I am glad that your grandfather does not have cancer and hope that he is well soon.

Though I look forward to your next chapter, don't rush. Take your time.

Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall

Yipee! Another chapter! Does happy chapter dance :)

Nice job with the flashback and Kikyou-Inu's discussion. Well girl, full steam ahead...you've gotten us started on the long road to a lemon. It's super sweet that Inu was thinking about *waiting* until the human ceremony was done, but 3 weeks??

Good for Kagome! She's waited too long to get her man, er, hanyou...and we've waited too long for a lemon from you. It'll be smashing good I'm sure.

As for the personal stuff...well, I'm glad that the docs were wrong ;)
In all honesty, you'd rather have them err on the side of caution and be proven wrong rather than the other way around, right?
I'm still waiting for my email.... 3 hours down the drain? Unbelievable! Bad yahoo!