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by CutiePieHentai

person KuroKen
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Cutie Pie Hentai:

As I write this, I am compelled to thank you, your craft, attention to detail and obvious knowledge of the realm you've chosen to work with is a marvel to behold, a labor of love that you've chosen to give us to enjoy.

These are but the most meager reasons why you and your writing are so special: I thank you for being of strong spirit and gentle soul, for sharing from your own life's experience and memories and thusly giving onto the memory of your loved one a homage that will remain within us all whom your work has touched, for this courage that you are so modest of, we are greatful.
I want to thank you for reading your reviews and replying in as much as you found the time or the pertinence to those who seeked to encourage or advise you, for skill tempered with modesty we thank you.

For being an example that inspires emulation -as it stands I am working on my first FanFic and have found your work a wealth of information in things from paragraph structure to dialog dynamic- and for accepting accolades while still striving to turn out work that not only satisfies your needs as a story teller but those of your audience as you magik us into caring, laughing and crying for the characters, thank you.
I undertook the reading of this piece from beginning to end in one sitting, within the span of time it has taken me to finish up to the current chapter I've laughed, been annoyed, felt angry, sad and on occasion lustful, but always entertained, thank you.
person KuroKen
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Indeed it would figure that I would enter a review and miss the signing in part *sighs* well "that" *glances up at the previous entry* was my password *grumble* well just wonderful, I will miss it.
One thing for nothing happens without a reason, after entering my review I noticed that ms. Suketchi had reviewed you recently as well. Before I came across your work ms. Cutie I was fortunate enough to read hers, I hope you have an oportunity to do so yourself.
person Mia
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
-lil Mia-kins >_<
person blossom
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is so good please update and soon
person Revera_04
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Friggin awesome story
person No Sugar Added
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*

I love this story...perfect balance of everything and an ORIGINAL (shocking!!) plot. I love it. Write more! NOW!!! ;-P
person Suketchi
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

First of all, I'd like to say thank you for such amazing work.Never in all my years of reading fanfiction, have i EVER read anything so astonishing....Seriousley. You are an inspiration to us all, including myself, who have had difficult lifetime experiances, showing us we're able to express ourselfs though writing, weather it be from our imagination, or a way to let out suppressed emotions that have been built up inside for so long.

The way you write is absolutley magnificent, each detail pictured in our heads, every scene visible in our minds....its,..there are no words to discribe this overwelming writing style...I am, which doesnt happen at all, speachless. For those who know me, know i am one who speaks my mind, weather saying something positive or negitive and you my dear...you....are a fabulous writer. I myself write and dont come close to your expertice, and no one else that ive read, including in books, do either.

I've been reading fanfiction for a very long time now, and have recently started my own fanfic, and would be greatly honored if you would read it and tell me what you think. It will never live up to the greatness of your writing, yet if you were to look at it and tell me what is good/bad in it, seeing that your such a talented writer I would hope you could give me some...pointers...per say. I bow to you, and hope that my post will be answered, for meeting someone such as yourself, would be a great thrill...honestly. Anyway, I also wanted to say, that i usually never do post a reveiw on any stories i read, weather i like them or not, so i hope this symbolizes that i truly do love your story.

Again, arigato for such an amazing peice, and i hope to hear from you soon. If you are intrested in reading my story, please let me know, and i'll email it....so yeah. Oh, and please update soon, that was a...'cliffy' right there, so please hurry.lol. thanks again,

^_^ Suketchi
person catt
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!^_^
person Sandro666
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is an unusual request from me, but the story was so good, and so right, and so enticing that I wish two things from you:

1) Please update with an ending soon, and not a crappy short one (I don't think you'll do this but just in case) along with a sequel

2) Change the word "Koi" to Koibuta, or whatever the original name is for the reason that the word "Koi" is the derogatory term for an orgasm, so saying it sort of just dampens the mood (No pun intended)

Once again thanks for such a great story so far, and when you do update I ask that you will please email me at: sandyblackhawk@hotmail.com
person Spud
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made me CRY damnit! But it was still beatifully written and plotted. Loved the beginning. Loved it, loved it, loved it! The WHOLE godforsaken chapter! *whimpers* but you cut it off right before the lemon! I feel so cheated. :.( But lemon comes next chappie! *reads A/N* Awww... I feel so cherished... I would add that I feel warm inside, but that's just because I had mexican chili for lunch today. :D Can't wait 'till you update, so for the love of God, do it soon!