rate_review Reviews

Holy fuck. I've sat here for 4 hours, I'm freezing, and my arm is asleep. Look what you made me do!! This is beyond wonderful, and just so you know, I'm not the "suck-up-to-make-you-feel-good-type". I especially liked the scene with Kagome and Shippou, telling her he'd never forget her. Hurray hurray. Very very very very nice, I shall now sit and attempt to wait patiently for your next update.

*is glued to computer screen*
Wonderfull lemon!
Very juicy...
*likes to drink lemon juice*
Don't ask!
Neways...
*deep breath*
New Chappie please!

That was, without doubt, on the top 10 list of most beautiful lemons I've read. Simply beautiful.

Yesssssss!
The lemon! The lemon!

Nice job...though, I have to admit that your food references gave me a good laugh! Inu's ears and al dente pasta? Hmm...next time I have pasta, it will bring odd thoughts to mind!

Y'know that I'm partial to auras colliding...a metaphysical fireworks to go along with the physical act! I"m just so happy that they finally got together! What a nice, long lemon too! Ahh..aggressive Inu...gotta love sweet but aggressive Inu! :)

Wow! It just keeps getting better!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!

COOL!!!!
plz continue - QUICKLY!!
and--hey, look!
a plot bunny!
(imitating Dory from Finding Nemo)
I shall catch it!
*runs after bunny*

OMG Jen...that chap was not a lemon...that was The Ultimate Inu-Kags Lemon lol...so absolutely perfect and romantic and sweet, not to mention hot :) and very Inu-Kag-ish :) Girl you so ROCK!!! This and Scherezade's one-shot are the best IY erotic stories I've ever come upon the good fortune to read. I'm SO not worthy. This was so beautiful...and HOT. Phew ::fans herself:: Ok... ahem... review...ass kissing...you deserve it, don't complain :P This actually (the whole story, not the chap) deserves a very long email of praise not a mere review...but let me try it now: YOU KICK ASS! Ok let me try again...this was awesome. Simply Perfect. So beautiful. Not merely a sex scene or a simple 'lemon', but sweet, steamy lovemaking at its best with our fave couple no less... beautifully described, wonderfully written, simply...wow. I have no words. I dislike to repeat myself but...did I mention you rock? YOU ROCK! I'm speechless. I will build you a small shrine for this, CP Hentai lol. ::bows:: Thank you for giving us this story! It's flawless, from the beginning to the last posted chap, and girl, like I said, I never lie, so if you don't want This YM to kiss your ass you should start doing something wrong with the story! :) I'll go take a cold shower now. Just kidding...maybe lol. Standing ovation. You rock, your story kicks ass, you're so talented it's selfish not to pass some talent onto us mere mortals struggling to write :P I freakin love you Jen! ::hugs:: And you know it's not just because of this chap :) Go you talented girl you!!!!!
Love and ramen!!!!
YM

Holy SHIT!!!! *moves to stand over vent and turns A/C up full blast* I'm gonna be here for a while, so I'll just get on with it. DAMN that was one helluva lemon!! *does tiny happy dance* You are a very experienced writer. I respect you for that. *bows down* Well, there's really nothing more to say, so I'll wait in murderous anticipation for the next update. Bye!

The undone buttons totaled five. okay... that was pretty good. a little different than other stories about Kag and Inu mating... but I guess you didn't take in the "mark" that most others do... not to knock you or anything... that was very well written though. Keep it up, you're almost done!!!

Awesome, awesome, awesome! I know that I've not reviewed this entire time, but I couldn't help but keep reading! (That, and I just found this fic 3 days ago and keep getting sidetracked from reading its entirety.) Love everything that you've done to build up to this point so far! All the images created really had me wanting more...all the things in a relationship - good, bad, everything....There isn't enough writing space in this world that expresses the way my heart feels for both Kags and Inu right now. Love it. Can't wait for the next update.

-Jazz-