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OMG! That was an amazing scene! The pictures it brought to mind, with the way you so elequently put every word, every expression of their love and their passion. OH, it was AMAZING! Keep up the GREAT work! YOU ARE GENIUS!

I love your story. It's brilliantly thought out. It has a plot not so different from what you would expect in the Manga or Anime with like a little Hentai twist that would most likely never be allowed (damn you FCC!). Keep up the great work looking forward to the next chappie.

I spent today reading a fascinating story with an unusual name ... one that initially prompted me to avoid the story altogether. I'm glad now that I took the chance and read the story completely - with author's notes - to the most recent chapter (34). I laughed, cried, and cheered on our heroes and heroines every step of the way. I felt your sadness when describing your husband's passing and how you wove it into the story. I felt your anxiety over your Grandfather. You are a talented, multi-faceted writer, with a gift for turning the (seemingly) smallest plot twist into a cliffhanger several chapters down the road. I look forward to seeing how you wrap all the ties together at the end, and I thank you for a day of fascinating reading!!!

*gulp* Did it get hot in here or is it just me??? Whooooo..... I love it!!! :D

wow, one of the best love scenes i have ever read !!!!!!!

Excellent lemon. I love Inu ear sex. I'm breathless and at a loss for words. The ending was very cute. I'm simply too tired to give an extended review. Perhaps tomorrow.

Whoa. Few things read as well as those that are written with life experience to back them up -before you think me moderately...ok seriously deranged- bear in mind that the things I say I mean with nothing but respect. I asked my girlfriend to read this-the whole enchilada- but I HAD to get her to read this latest chapter first, she came to the same conclusion: the caring, yet wanton way in which you describe intimacy between *sighs because of the cliché he's about to use* soul mates is a force all of its own. It transcends the stylistic needs of the story and even the characters themselves.

To explain lovemaking in such a frank and honest way just has the heft of 'realness' to it.
When Kagome goes thru the "please no more...it's too much" stage or as she attempts to explain "no...not like that..." it increases the degree in which the readers can relate with the story: as much as some other works would have you believe that both parties always know what's going on or even what the 'best' thing to get a rise from their partner is, without ever having doubts or God forbid asking for directions, it is just not as immersing as when the audience gets to partake in Inu's discovery of how to stimulate Kagome's body alternatively to keep from burning the poor girl out or the anxiety both show when because of the newness of their intimacy they fear hurting or offending their lover.
We laughed, albeit a bit self-consciously as we read this together, more than anything we laughed in recognition, we have both said or done the same things when first learning each others bodies, likes and needs…but I digress. *Remembers he has a bottle of Merlot and a girl to attend to*

Again great payoff for the buildup, I can’t wait to see the next chapter. Hurry up and don’t forget Sango and Miroku those two need more practice :-P

P.S. Thanks for helping me get some tonite, heh heh.

Well done.

well, that was hot, ne? let me just say that i'm going to be enjoying that lemon for a while yet. it was very, very, very tastefully done and you did a wonderful job describing everything. i enjoyed this chapter very, very much and i hope to read more from you soon. please, please, please write more for me soon. please, i need more! (this is me begging you shamelessly)

it was a great update and i hope to read more from you soon. (glomps for all!)

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf