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for Sloppy Seconds

by CutiePieHentai

person M
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the updates, but we still want more!!!
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Kagome. True, Kikyou has to be included with the Council, but she's still hurt by Inuyasha going to her. The meaning of her turning her back is obvious to me as well, at least I hope it is. I'm seeing that she's giving up on Inuyasha. I think he's hurt her one too many times. I'm curious to see how the exchange is going to go between Kikyou and Inuyasha. I have the feeling something may happen, since he went into her arms, but I also have the feeling that she might talk to him about Kagome. I think it would be cool if she released Inuyasha so he can be with Kagome, but somehow I don't see that happening just yet. What I would really like to see is a talk between Kikyou and Kagome about Inuyasha. Maybe that will help Kagome understand things better, and Kagome won't feel like "sloppy seconds" anymore.
person essie
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic please update soon
person Cherise
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! THAT WAS A GREAT STORY! ESPECIALLY CHAPTER 9 WITH THE ICE CREAM!EXCELLENT!PLEASE RIGHT MORE!

person vblum12
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww! MORE!!
person essie
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic please update soon
person MyOwnHappyEnding (not logged on)
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Perfect amount! Just enough to get me going...and now since I"m horny I have to go... keep writing!!
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOD
person Nikkie InuHanyou
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying your story. You have a pretty nice flow to your time line. Characters are full and realistic. Very humourous too. Please keep up the good work and please update soonest. And 20 would be pleasant.
person M
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo.....u updated!!!! Thank you so much...now I hate to be needed but can we have more??