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Aww! I LOVED this story so far. It's very heart-warming, very endearing. I actually shed tears when Mama Higurashi was talking about her Husband, and cried more when I learned it was an experience taken from your own life. You know you have a real peice of art when you can draw tears to your readers, when you can draw emotion. I commend you on your fine art here, Keep up the good work.

Hello. That lemon was well writen and, dare I say it, filled to the brim with lemony goodness. It is one of the best lemons that I have read, the others being those by Sueric (the BEST of the best) and the entire story of Something Real on this site. One part I particularily liked was when InuYasha couldn't take Kagome for fear of hurting her, his devotion and love for her and his will not to hurt her anymore really shine through in that part. Well done. On another note, I'm not sure if you want to hear this but I think there may have been some spelling errors. Shippou's attack, kitsune-bi has the 'i' at the end not 'e'. 'i's are pronounced as 'ee', while 'e' is pronounced as something else. Now I need to find that chart again. Also 'Aishiteru' is the spelling of 'I love you'. Don't hate me for telling you that. Most people don't like it when I tell them the correct spellings. Is the story done now or are there more chapters to come?
Ok now for the conclusion, Bows. Thank you for taking so much time out of your life to thiknk up, write, edit, and post this story onto this site amoung others, for the entire English speaking, computer owning, and internet acessable population of the Earth. Anyone who does all of this are some of the bravest people that I know of. Thank you. Zincpaw

Holy hell... I have no words with which to review this little gem. Do you have any idea how bizarre that is? My ridiculous, full-blown critique has simply flown away. I can say without a single doubt that this is probably the best IY fic (hentai or non) I have ever had the pleasure of reading, and that's the first time I've ever said that. Thank you so much for doing the characters and the story justice. I hope you update soon. This is on my favorites list...

Absolutely AMAZING story! And your lemons are so tasteful, and detailed. Thank you for being a magnificent writer. :)

oh you are evil to leave us hanging like that but to give you your dues it is a ass kicking story and i loved it please finish it i wanna see want happens

I dont really know wat to say but that was a really awsome story so far so keep it coming or ill go insane trying to guess wat happens next!!!!!!!! BYE BYE

IT WAS AWSOME!!!=^-^=

Wow! i reviewed you before and now I've finally finished the chapters you have written, and you knw what? I WANT MORE! I can't stand having to wait, I love your story and how you just don't end it when Naroku is killed. I hope you update soon, otherwise, every few days or so I'm gonna wrtie again and again... UPDATE!!~ GOTTA LOVE YA! Please update soon.

Ok, I just started reading this fanfic now and I've already made my way up to chapter 8 (which I've just finished) and before I go any further, there are just a few things I need to say... *takes in big breath* I LOVE YOUR TITLES! THEY ARE SOOOOO CUTE! I WAS ON MY WAY TO CHAPTER 9 WHEN I SAW A TITLE BELOW SAYING *WHO LET THE DOGS OUT* AND I THINK THAT THAT IT WAS SOO CREATIVE OF YOU!

Ok ooops, pressed enter... *smacks self on the head* anyway second of all... I LOVE THE WAY THIS STORY IS GOING AND I AM SOOO UNBELIEVABLY HAPPY THAT THERE ARE MORE THAN 20 CHAPTERS LEFT FOR ME TO READ! *gulps in big gasp of air as if about to spontaniosly combust* and.... I JUST HAD TO TELL YOU JUST HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR WRITING YOU'VE GOT TALENT! * blows kisses and waves* talk to you soon, chapter 9 beckons me...