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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was the best in a while. I'm very mad at inu's reaction to her declaration of love. They really need to learn to communicate...oh, and it should be the hard way
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol! that was great!
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it. keep up the amazing work, and please update very very soon! i absolutely hated inuyasha when he went off to kikyo. what a jerk! but i really like the inu/kag moments. continue asap
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
as always, a good chapter! i can't believe how quickly you update and still keep the story so interesting! i can't waitreadread the next chapter, i look forward to it!
and i really love the sexual tension between the two and i can't wait for their lemon! it'll be hard, fast, and yummy!
update soon! (that's almost like a joke, ne?)
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
and i really love the sexual tension between the two and i can't wait for their lemon! it'll be hard, fast, and yummy!
update soon! (that's almost like a joke, ne?)
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated! i love this story. i don't think it's too out of character... maybe a little but then a couple of years have gone by since the last episoed we've seen of the anime so it's still believable. my only criticism is a couple of little inconsistencies in the story now and then... like one being that at the beginning of the story kagome gives inuyasha her jewel shards but then has them with her when she returns trhough the well... that's the only example i can think of, nothing big but just something to look out for when you're writing :) oh, and just to let you know, the site hasn't been letting me (or anyone else, i'm guessing) post reviews this past week or two so don't feel bad... anyway, awsome story! please update again soon!
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i would be more than willing to wake up in inu's arms every morning! who wouldn't? ^.^ (hentai mind, hentai mind)
this was a great chapter, and i can't believe how close we were to a lemon! (frustrated!) i hope one comes up soon. oh! kagome could get hurt in this battle that inu's about to fight in and then in a fit of passion, he lets loose and completely ravishes kago-chan, ne? (hentai mind... ^.^)
well, i hope you update soon!
did you get my email review?
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
this was a great chapter, and i can't believe how close we were to a lemon! (frustrated!) i hope one comes up soon. oh! kagome could get hurt in this battle that inu's about to fight in and then in a fit of passion, he lets loose and completely ravishes kago-chan, ne? (hentai mind... ^.^)
well, i hope you update soon!
did you get my email review?
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful story and i hope to read a lemon soon! ^.^ i'm a hentai... wcan can i say? ^.^
i can't wait for the next chapter and i hope you update soon!
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
i can't wait for the next chapter and i hope you update soon!
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its good, but inu and kag need to get together soon or i will cry!!! *the gods hate me*
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September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really likin' this story and want some more of it! Keep up the good work and update soon! <3<3
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, i really mean excellent, nicely done and that talk between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was really good! Hope to read the next chapter soon!