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for Sloppy Seconds

by CutiePieHentai

person Jake
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsome. to bad though. kinda sad. but awsome all the same. i wish that you would update alot quicker than you do. plz plz plz plz plz update soon. thanx.

Jake.
person hanyou-elf
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(glomps) yay! i'm so glad you updated! and i'm really sorry to hear about your computer. kami-sama, that sucks! i hope you can keep up the previous pace (not before the computer crashed) of updates and bring me more joy! i love this story and i can't believe how close they were! (snaps fingers in disappointment) k'so! so close, so far, ne? oh well, next chapter maybe? a lemon? anyone's lemon? hell, i don't care if shippo has a self moment... (^.~) just so long as i get a little bit more than the limey teasing you've been doing!

oh, btw, kagome didn't react at all to inuyasha's calling her mate? is there a reason for that?

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
person shaina
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such an amazing story, and it's sooooo hot!!!!! I can't WAIT to find out what happens next. I'm so glad you updated. Kagome and Inuyasha are so sexy.
person REVERA_04
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!!!!!
person g
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person hanyou-elf
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(glomps) a new chapter! i'm so excited! i checked every day for the new chapter and i am so glad you finally added a new chapter! i can't wait to see what miroku and sango do (you will write a lemonny good chapter, ne?) and what develops between inuyasha and kagome... i mean athey are both naked and wet and yummy for each other... you know? update this soon, this time i'm serious! i'm glad that you have gotten over your writer's block (you have, ne?) and are going to update soon!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
person Revera_04
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol - too muchldisldish abandon certainly leads to interesting consequences.
person ~A~
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You may have had trouble writing the chapter, but I think it turned out really well. It fits with the rest of the story, and I think overall it's good, even though you had writers block. Please update soon =)
person Revera_04
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!!! NEXT CHAPTER!PLEASE HURRY!