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for Sloppy Seconds

by CutiePieHentai

person Mia
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! PWEASE!!! I just can't wait to read the next chappie! >_<
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:) I like the motorcycle ride and what followed. Very touching.
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...chapter 26 had me very choked up...beautiful work with that one (and of course the rest of the fic is excellent, too, or I wouldn't be reading it!)
person Jademardh
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You know, this whole time, I really loved this story, but this last chapter it really put a lump in my throat, only because it reminded me of my own father. Please hurry and continue. Thank you.
person chio
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you are good!!!!!
This story is becoming my favorite. Thanks for sharing it, it is so sweet.
person RavenShadow
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Kami!!!! I think i got a toothache from that chapter, it was so sweet. Yet it was also very beautiful, please update soon!
person vashta
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was way toooo sweet! I think I have a cavity!!!! I am really enjoying your story so far, I like double updates. When can we expect another. (JK about the too sweet part!)
person NA
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your story- great writing. The 'prom' chapter was very sweet! I'll look forward to reading more.
person whirleeQ
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Absolutely love it. The 'plum' thing was soooo sweet :).

Oh, and I still respect you, but want more ;)
person Laken
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is going good.You keep writting this story. You have kept the characters true attribute the same as the show most of the time.