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wow! Your fight scene was great! I've knew you were having them gathering allies I just never knew you would gather...them all. This is probably the best allied final battle I've read so far. Usually people just have Inuyasha, Kagome, Sango, Miroku, Shippou, Kirara, Kikyou, Kouga with his wolves, and Sesshoumaru. It never fails that people usually have those people only in the final battle, but you went all out. Very nicely done I think it's great for a person who says they don't do fight scenes. Well now I can't wait for the next chapter that was one hell of a cliffie you ended with! I wonder what Kikyou did? I'm suprised Inuyasha trusted Kikyou to touch Kagome after all the times Kikyou tried to hurt her in the series and all. Well better cut this short so you wont have to read too much. Thanks again for another great chapter!

Elisa

Silly girl..'twas my pleasure to read. What are winter breaks for? Sigh. Now at the end of that. Thanks for the plug (I'm sorta embarassed).

Good grief! I finally read the whole chapter and I'm just....sitting here with a dumb grin on my face :)
I know I've said this to you before, but yours is the first fic that I've seen that brings in such a comprehensive cast of characters to help in the final battle. Very "Lord of the Rings" style with an epic battle. And I just love that concept! The funny thing is that it makes so much sense when you think about it...afterall, Naraku has the potential to change life as it is for everyone -human and demon- in Japan. Why shouldn't humans and demons band together to fight him?
And nice clarification about Sesshie's arm - made much more sense to me. Did anyone get the reference? Wink, wink, nudge, nudge? If not...I'll set the killer rabbit with the pointy teeth on them...or perhaps use the holy hand grenade...
:)
Your actual battle scene was great...and I'm glad that you didn't drag it on for too long. Just enough action. Everyone seems to be getting their happy endings...Kohaku is alive; Ayame will get Kouga; and Kikyo....hmm...

But what we're waiting for is the mating...(Starts chanting "lemon...lemon...lemon....lemon...lemon")


I can't *wait* to read what the next chapter has in store.

GOD I'm loving this storyline! The intrigue, the humor, and the hentai... the perfect balance of awesomeness! KEEP IT UP!!!

Ahhh! Evil Cliffie! But I trust you; you won't let us suffer too long, now will you? I didn't think so. Y'know, I've read a lot of fanfics about the 'last battle,' so to speak, but I really think that this is by far the best yet. You managed to keep it from seeming trite, which, I'll admit, is no small feat. This actually seemed like a natural place for the plot to go, instead of the too-convenient wrapping up of loose ends that so many other, less talented authors turn their stories into. Brava!
~MidsummerDreamer (pen name)

I hope that's not the end!!! this has been too good to just end like that. there's almost no closure, and it leaves so many questions! I know, I'm rambling... but this is really good! better than my fics I'll tell you what.

Keep it up!

love the story, i check almost everyday to see you have posted. one thing caught my eye though. the fight between hakudoshi and sessh. was that a shout out to monty python? its gotta be. i found it quite funny. mega props to you for that. post soon!

Ya know, usually, I can find something wrong with a story...but I can't offer any criticism!! New favorite story of all time. That was the best fight scene ever; you are an amazing writer. Update soon!

Oh please tell me there will be more. Pleasepleaseplease let there be more. You absolutely cannot end it here. This was awsome. One of the best Inu Yasha pieces I've read in a while.

Another good chapter, short and sweet. I think I might have liked the authors note at the end more then the chapter... is that bad? Well the final battle is coming up and I can't wait to read it! I know it's going to be great since you have a knack for making great stories and also being a part of them. Until the next chapter, Good bye!

I thought it was a lovely last chapter. And no, I did not read much of your note, merely skimmed it. Everything ends in death and tears. Even the happiest of stories. Treasure what you have and do not turn away the hope for more...and above all be as happy as possible.

When the chips are down, that is all we really have.