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o naw its ok my sympathies to you.. take as long as you need.. great story

Sorry about you're grandfather. I hope he's okay (you know what I mean...). The date is pretty ironic though, don't ya think? Kinda disturbing, really...

Oh gosh...I stumbled onto your story today, thinking it was finished, and now I'm freaking out at the thought of having to wait for the rest. I'm new to Inuyasha fandom, but not to fanfic, and this is one of the best that I've ever read. The courtship, the love, the fights, the sweeping battle against Naraku, the lemony goodness....I'm just in heaven. Now get to work and post the the next chapter! I wants me a good lemony ending for Inuyasha and Kagome! :)

I love your story, it's everything all the other Inu Yasha fan fics should be modeled after. I would like to admit there was some disappointment in the battle because you built up all this suspense and it ends in what seems like a matter of minutes. Bah, what the hell do I know, I haven't even written a fan fic yet.

Please post more!!!

update soon, its very good, and the cliff hanger at the end is mind rapeing

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO T_T WHY WHY WHY STOP THERE you are a great writer please update soon the fight part great pllllllllllllleeeeeeaase update

(rising and applauding the chapter) well, i have to say that that was beautifully written and wonderfully presented. you did a marvelous job describing everything and the excellent effort that it took to keep the battel flowing and still keep the level of description... (applause) beautiful! i loved it! you should so not be shy about the way you write your action sequences. you did a wonderful job here (except for a few spelling errors on attacks and names). i was very impressed and engrossed.

... and i also have this deep desire to call you a bitch for the evil ass cliff-hanger at the end of this chapter. but, i suppose it is fitting as the chapter does address so much other things. (shrugs)

who knows. and to the question of trusting inuyasha, hell yeah! (nodding vigorously)

great job and i look forward to the next email! (love that btw!)
~hanyou-elf

Wow... And I thought your A/N made me cry... That was truly beautiful. Nothing more, nothing less. That's all there is to it.

omg ivebeen reading your fic.. checking for new chapters and such.. this is soooooo beautiful im crying right now.. this was such a beautiful chapter.. great writing and perceived emotions.. the fight scenes were great to... the end where kohaku is reborn or watever because of sesho. that was so beautiful.. GREAT WORK.. i cant wait for the next chapter