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by CutiePieHentai

schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rushed to read the minute you told me this was updated (which I really appreciate, thanks :) ). As to Kikyo's character, I haven't seen any of those really later episodes to judge, though I do believe she isn't as cold and heartless as she normally seems, simply because there is part of Kagome's soul in her. So to me, it was definitely a possibility for her to act that way. I love, too, how you captured the emotion of that moment.

I think the best part of the InuYasha/Kagome half of the chapter is how he was willing to wait for the human ritual of marriage before mating. Heh. The image of how shocked he must've been when Kagome just asked "When do we mate?" - someone should do a picture of that. I would, if I were a better artist with the InuYasha characters, but I've only just started with fanart.
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope this week goes better for you.
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you need a break, especially with the emotional stree you must be enduring, as well as the writing, take it. (and remember, I'm only suggesting). I'm sure your other readers will agree with me, that we can wait.

And wow...my internet was down for a while, which is why I haven't been making my usual short comments, lol, but it's working again finally and wow...these last few chapters were simply amazing.
person psyco_chick32
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My thoughts are with you and your family... I will wait in patient, yet anxious, anticipation to find out what happened with Kagome and Kikyo!!!
person chio
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love your story and I am waiting for an update. It´s very difficult when a member of your family is sick, It´s hard in mind and heart. But If you have family, always your family is first so don´t worry about us. We can wait for you.

Thanks for sharing. See you.
Bye,
Chio
person kinky lurker
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hanyou-elf will be praying for you. i hope that the scan results come back to the best of your expectations. i hope everything is going okay and i hope you're doing fine. don't worry about the story. take care of yourself and your family and then take care of us. we'll wait for you, 'kay?
person YoukaiMusashi (not signed in)
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wrote you an email, Jen, in response to yours, but I didn't read this before, so I didn't know about your grandfather then...I'm sorry. It sounds lame to say that...when there's really nothing to say but hope and pray and Believe everything will be okay.
I will be praying for you and your family and sending you all my love and hope that he'll be okay. Hope and love are a great combination...I don't know what to say, except you can always count on me. Hugs, YM.
person malice_elisa
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, I'm sorry about your week being so bad. I hope your grandfather gets better. Don't force yourself to work on a chapter if you have family affairs to attend to. Even though I love reading new chapters, you take as much time as you need to get your own problems worked out.
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I am so sorry to hear that, I hope everything will be ok. I can't wait for the next update, thankie!!!! Update soon!!!^_^
person comicfancat
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You held me in your hands,heart beating fast and than I got to chapter 32.....ouch.Yet I understand and hope you can get
through this and that 2005 is better for you.Till we meet again