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October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god, this story was so great. I loved all the fluffy moments and the little hidden things. The ending brought tears to my eyes, and I loved it, especially his mother coming to him and her being Midoriko's great-granddaughter. I really hope that life is treating you well, and you may find a very happy life after everything you have been through. I hope an epilogue is able to be created. Great story
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this isn't really a review (I'll be sure to do that when I've gone through your whole story, I just started it), but a little details note. In your chapter 7, "Scrolls" (which I'm reading right now), you wrote that Souta's age was 10, however, you'd stated some chapters earlier that it had been at least three years since the shard-hunting started, putting Kagome at 18 years of age or so, correct? If you recall from the series (I haven't read the manga yet, so I can't be sure if its there too), Souta is in the third grade, making him 8 or 9, and according to your timeline, shouldn't he be in the sixth grade, maybe seventh, making him at least 12? If, however, making him 10 is more suitable to what you're writing in your scenes, then that's cool, I get it. Just wondering if you knew about this timeline/age thing... Anyway, that's it. You'll no doubt get a proper review when I'm done. Ciao, and good luck!
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. just wow.
The amount of research and thought that went into this battle and chapter are astounding. The editing is excellent.
I can honestly say this is the best final battle I've read and well.. I read alot. I've never been good at reveiwing, so I rarely comment, due to my rather poor way with words, in so far as giving feedback that is constructive -as opposed to mindless babbling about how impressed I am.
I am blessed (cursed?) with photo recall, and posession of the series. You've put so much THOUGHT into what might happen if the pack pulled in all their markers.
Kudos.
Silvermist the Taleweaver
The amount of research and thought that went into this battle and chapter are astounding. The editing is excellent.
I can honestly say this is the best final battle I've read and well.. I read alot. I've never been good at reveiwing, so I rarely comment, due to my rather poor way with words, in so far as giving feedback that is constructive -as opposed to mindless babbling about how impressed I am.
I am blessed (cursed?) with photo recall, and posession of the series. You've put so much THOUGHT into what might happen if the pack pulled in all their markers.
Kudos.
Silvermist the Taleweaver
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo, i came to read your fics, and i am ABOLUTELY stunned by your talent to write :O you rock girl! its reeeeeeeally wonderful, your fic its magnificent :D :D congrats...but tell me, did u give up on ur story???OMFG, UPDATE PLEASE???!!!! kisses ;**
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was great and I can't wait to read any other storties you may have.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dang good story :)
overall a REALLY good plot, the char's arent too OOC and overall it is very well writen, good story! :)
-Urgazhi
overall a REALLY good plot, the char's arent too OOC and overall it is very well writen, good story! :)
-Urgazhi
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why won't you update this story anymore? I really really really miss it!