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by Somnambulicious

person Elise(Demon Child)
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. The depth of it and the detail. Just amazing. It also helps I'm a rather rabid Kagome/Hiei fan, but that's besides the point. I think I'll just get down to it. Usually when I get to the part of where the author needs to write more I deal out a "threat". So here ya go. If you don't get this amazing production finished I will be forced to feed you 56lbs of lime green jello! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! ;-) .......ahem......anyway keep writing!!

DC
person Jessjess
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sure, friends are easier to deal with than family anyway. Hehehehe, Inu gets a wake-up call! I love it. Nice resolution on the Kouga thing, although it will be funny to see Hiei deal with that one. I still feel so bad for Souta. Um....thinking, give me a minute....trying to think of something I haven't said in a previous review. Repetition is boring. Oh yeah, Yuuske dealing with birth control pills! *snickers* Would have loved to see you write about that little gem, and I was picturing a bigger change to Sango and Kagome for some reason. Let's not forget the prod to find out exactly what Hiei's jagan wants with Kagome, other than the obvious that is, *rolls eyes* duh! I seem to get hints that there is more to that situation than you have been telling. Or it could just be my subconscious telling me tI waI want your story to grow to epic proportions in order to enhance my day. Okay, I ramble sometimes, doesn't everybody? One more thing and I'll let you *GOD I HATE STUPID POP-UPS THAT MANAGE TO GO AROUND THE POP-UP CONTROL!!!* Stupid useless software. Forgot the previous line of thought, oh well, I'll remeber it later. Bye-bye!
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
best chapter so far ~_^
person Diane
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this so far & can't wait for the next chapter. I do have 1 comment/correction, in 1 chapter you give an example of Oni [at the top] & it's a bit off Oni = ogre & in Japan there are a wide range of oni varieties, Yura of the Hair is an oni & so is the giant blue guy Sesshoumaru rides on.
person JuniperJazz
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::smiles:: at least you're not an "old salt" like me (apparently)...btw. great chapter...and I am sooo glad Kouga survived and made it all the way to the Modern era. :-) Of course, now it will be even MORE interesting to deal with the high levels of testosterone. (sp?)
person JuniperJazz
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::smiles:: at least you're not an "old salt" like me (apparently)...btw. great chapter...and I am sooo glad Kouga survived and made it all the way to the Modern era. :-) Of course, now it will be even MORE interesting to deal with the high levof tof testosterone. (sp?)
person JerJaerJazz
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::smiles:: at least you're not an "old salt" like me (apparently)...btw. great chapter...and I am sooo glad Kouga survived and made it all the way to the Modern era. :-) Of course, now it will be even MORE interesting to deal with the high levels of testosterone. (sp?)
person JuniperJazz
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::smiles:: at least you're not an "old salt" like me (apparently)...btw. great chapter...and I am sooo glad Kouga survived and made it all the way to the Modern era. :-) Of course, now it will be even MORE interesting to deal with the high levels of testosterone. (sp?)
person UmiY7© Ý
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see the next chapter out.
But it's a bit creepy with Hiei laughing and all.
Keep at it and I hope you make the fight sence between Naraku and are buddies a good one.
See Ya'
person Jaded Neko
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaah! You hurt Kouga, no you didn't hurt him, you had his frickin' leg chopped off by a bird!! A BIRD! (Actually a Harpy, but damn American dubbing) That's unhumain! That's it, you can't play with Kouga anymore I'm taking him home with me!
^ That ranting up there is the resultchugchugging Nyquil for two days.
Anyhow absolutely love the emotional roller coaster of it all. One moment I'm happy at the interaction then the next I'm depressed as hell only to get happy again.

Oh and the ofudas made of post-it-notes, brilliant! Sadly I've been going around my friends sticking bright pink post-its on their foreheads with little scribbles on it.
I blame you! And television!