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for Paradox

by Somnambulicious

person JuniperJazz
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I am kinda glad that Hiei and Kagome were interrupted. I love a little rivalry between 'protectors' every once in awhile. What I think would *really* be fun is Kurama being interrupted by Kouga...hehehe and Kouga's chastisement interrupted by Inu because Inu's reconsidering his 'love' for Kags. *snickers* But then *sigh* it would be my fic, not yours.....Besides, Hiei and Kags need a little more emotional bonding before their 'physical bond' is worthwhilehat hat and Youko is prolly up to no good, so we need to find out what HE's up to.....Can't wait for the next one!!!!
person sesshysgirl08
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOUR SOOOOO MEAN YOU CANT LEAV THE THERE!!!!!!!!! ehem sry bout that.This chappie was sooooo amazing!!!! WOW!!! I love it really i do. So please oh please oh please update soon and please let me know when your next chappie is up ok. Thanx soooo much!!!!
person anne
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the story
person JuniperJazz
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope your kids get spoiled...rotten...! Great chapter. Can't say it enough, I don't think. At least Kouga's okay - and has 'moved on'...although, it would kinda really mess things up if Kags went back to the Feudal era and told him about her being...quite the modern woman. (Think of the chaos that would ensue ;-) Oh yeah, I love that Hiei is firing things up. He really didn' t give Inu much a chance to protest his intensions. Gotta love that about Hiei...oh yeah, and Inu. Hey! What if Inu rethinks his decision in the modern era??? What do you think would happen - besides throw off your entire storyline? :-) Can't wair yor your next Chapter!
person JuniperJazz
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope your kids get spoiled...rotten...! Great chapter. Can't say it enough, I don't think. At least Kouga's okay - and has 'moved on'...although, it would kinda really mess things up if Kags went back to Feu Feudal era and told him about her being...quite the modern woman. (Think of the chaos that would ensue ;-) Oh yeah, I love that Hiei is firing things up. He really didn' t give Inu much a chance to protest his intensions. Gotta love that about Hiei...oh yeah, and Inu. Hey! What if Inu rethinks his decision in the modern era??? What do you think would happen - besides throw off your entire storyline? :-) Can't wait for your next Chapter!
person JuniperJazz
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope your kids get spoiled...rotten...! Great cha. C. Can't say it enough, I don't think. At least Kouga's okay - and has 'moved on'...although, it would kinda really mess things up if Kags went back to the Feudal era and told him about her being...quite the modern woman. (Think of the chaos that would ensue ;-) Oh yeah, I love that Hiei is firing things up. He really didn' t give Inu much a chance to protest his intensions. Gotta love that about Hiei...oh yeah, and Inu. Hey! What if Inu rethinks his decision in the modern era??? What do you think would happen - besides throw off your entire storyline? :-) Can't wait for your next Chapter!
person sesshysgirl08
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO GOOD!!!!! I loved it it was amazing. You r just amazing. I really cant wait to read your next chapter and please let me know when it will be up ok. O and the reason i havent been updating is cause i just got my internet beack 2day so i didnt want you to think i forgot about this amazing story. So please update soon and i love this story it is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh i really hope that you update soon. i don't usually update until the last chapter so i have to say that this is the best xover that i ever read. although you should add more kurama (HE IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOTTTTT) OK THEN BYE BYE
person Jaded Neko
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright I guess I can put you on probation, you only get Kouga on the weekends.
As ys yys you don't disappoint, humorous and serious, nicely mixed together! :-D I even got a lesson in birth control! Super plus!

But now I have questions: How is it that Kanna is still young but Kagura's old? What's Kagome's big backup plan? Why is Nuraku such a voyaure (I know I spelled that wrong.)? Will Souta be broken? How will he ever pinky promise again? Why do fools fall in love? Where does the sidewalk end? What came first the chicken or the egg? When do the limes stop and the lemons come on? Why did I read this instead of study for my exam?
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great chapter!!!
(sorry i know i kind of say the samethings over and over, its just i dont think i have the right...to like...you know, give advice about writing, Cause the gods know how bad i am at writing!! ~_^) Though i do have a guestion, is kirara still in the story???? just wondering
well anyway i also like trying to think up of some type of questions to ask you, cause i like it when arthurs response back to their readers, and you do. Plus i like how you have a lil paragraph for your response and its all by itself for you to read, lol well its obvious that im rambling so ill stop here!
thank you for the great read
cya