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Dear Sommy,

I'm still suspicious until the story is done, however you are provisionally forgiven for the moment. Yes, the lemon was chocked fully of ny gny goodness, but the most important thing in my mind is the thing that Hiei picked up. Others can drool about the lemons, I want to know about the plot!!
Will the Jagan reveal all? What is the secret hidden in Kagome's mi Are Are they two separate things? What the hell is that black thing? These are the question you have yet to answer. Not to mention, poor little Souta under the constant hammering of Naraku's evil influence, and why the Red Sox win the series. Oh wait, that was part of my Questions to God email, ignore that last part. I look forward to the others being answered.

Your loyal Reviewer,
and sometimes nagging influence,
Jessjess

Yey now I can die happy. Wait, no that makes me sound even more insane than being crazy. And besides I can't die just yet I have so many crazy things to do that scares people in elevators to just die. Also I want to read how everyone reacts when they find out about Kagome's trade-off with Fluffy.

Tell me am I weird for thinking that the Jagan is cute? Loved the interaction between Kagome and the eye. Acutally I loved it all! Even with poor 'Gome getting hit on by another woman, for some reason I couldn't stop laughing at that.

~JN

I really you your story, but you have made me anxious. She absolutely has to stay with Hiei, she can't go with Sess. Please, don't make her.

wow...good story! but bad cliffie...evil evil evil place to end! *growls* you've got to update soon...please!

This story is awesome. I absolutly adore and can't help checking daily for updates, even though I know you need time to write the chapters. The charcters feels IC (and Hiei is as hot as ever ;-) ). The plot line is exciting and you certainly keeps me guessing about whats next. "Jagan" Hmm, does this mean we're going to that entity's interest in our heroine?

Ah, I'm in great mourning. The Yankees got their asses handed to them on a silver plater. *Sob* Not that I really care but I was forced into being their fan when I lived about eight blocks from the stadium (Saying otherwise is suicide). But the good news is that you've updated so that eases some of the pain...

Everyone's protective of Kagome and a little uncertainty, if I didn't know how that feels I would say its cute. Damn stupid human insecurities. But at least we're sure or at least hope we are sure where their relationship is heading.
Now Sessy keeping her as a pet...ugh the first thing that pops into mind is Kagome in a Princess Leia situation (yes I've seen Star Wars, repeatedly, blame my mother!). But now I'm dieing to know how the others will react to it once they find.
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Humm, I must say I find your story most intriguing and fun to read(quite a bit to try and all get in one sitting though ^_^;;). I will admit a bit of displeasure at it not being a Kurama pairing, but as you said, alternate pairings are fun so I just went with your flow anyways. A Hiei/Kagome fic always seems to make more sense for some reason though in a YuYu/Inu cross over with alt. pairings. I like your character portrials of those from both of my favorite animes, and want to congradulate you on them all seeming to be lacking OOCness. Your internal Youko/Kurama arguments are very fun to follow, and an enjoyable twist on the usual. I fully agree with you on Kurama hardly being such a price charming all of the time and the internal conflict seems very befitting. I do hope that you write another fun fiction with him as such in it. I will admit I would see Youko as likely a bit more mature then he is introduced(hehe, though that is a fun mental image that you gave of Youko practically bouncing around while singing "highschool Girls, highschool Girls") but one might also wager that being stuck in Kurama so long that he has grown a bit more fun loving in an antsy, immature kind of way. Anyways, in short, I love your fic, can't wait for your next update, plan to check out your other fic on and and your site as well XP.

ps:
Miroku was still half-asleep as he prepared breakfast, spilling the first pot of tea into the fire and nearly sending his robes up in flames on two occasions.

I thought Miroku was no longer in his robes but rather Kakki pants, a shirt and a hoodi o.O??

Hmmm, uber reviewer am I? I like it. BTW I have decided to name you the Writer Terrorist, holding innocent chapters in your head even though they scream to get out. You shall hold that title until you start writing faster.

Oooh, I can hardly wait to see what our little Hiei will have to say about this new development. I'm sure he will be appropriately scathing in his "gratitude" and dig himself into a nice hole. Hm, Yuusuke teaching Hiei how to grovel. The mind boggles. Sesshomaru getting his ass handed to him for his impertenence. Maybe the title for that chapter should be 'Everyone Yells At Kagome," ne? It's what's going to happen.

HOPE to see more SOON.

.... *eyebrow.... twitching* You are an evil, eeeevil person, and I can just see you rubbing your hands together and wickedly plotting to yourself now that I was silly enough to give you a peek into the mind of my muses. XP

*giggling* Loved the chapter though... Bishis being evil and snarly, what's not to swoon over? Well done and well written, but damn you for that title teaser at the end! *shaking fist in frustration*

(I'd say more, but it's ra lat late and I'm about to accidentally mistake the keyboard for a pillow. LOL! Talk to ya soon though!)

Yaaaah! Love your twisted, demented plot...that just thickened! (Might just have to go back through it to make sure I got all the details)
Anyhoo, waiting on the update was sooo worth it! :-) Can't wait to see what you have in store next time!