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for Paradox

by Somnambulicious

person Loki
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read my reveiw and there are soo many spelling, ect. mess ups it jus embaressing. My only excuse is I was typing fast so I'm really sorry! In case you couldn't make heads or tails of it all I was sayng is thank to the author, that I love this story ,and that I can't wait to see what will happen next. So if you haven't read this story yet I recomend you do, because its truely a great story. So again I'm sorry for my last reveiw, and to the author I would just like to say.....PLZ plz plz update soon!!!!! [signed] Loki
person vashta
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to finally get an update. I really like your story, but I don't like the whole Sessho deal. I suppose that is the idea though? I am confident that you will get her out of it and let her keep Hiei!? How long are you thinking this will be? Will the lady bandit be back or is she dead? I couldn't quite get that, I think she is dead but also she seemed to just dissappear, I may have just missed it? Great story, first Kag Hiei fic that I have liked.
person Asilin
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter! it was good. will we get more of an explanation for the jagan next time? i hope so. well, update as soon as you can!
person Richelle
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE please please keep writing!!!!!! I absolutly LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!
person Luna the lunatic
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want an update! I want an update! I want an Update!
person Mija
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg I finally caught up and am now panting with frustration...damn thas gas good, great lemon and all those wonderfull chapters leading up to it were awsome, totally loved the chaps and sooooooo cant wait for more, hope its soon, just finished and Im already going through withdrawherehere...lol...great work Somn please update soon...*this coming from the girl who hasnt updated in forever* ...m...much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person stacey
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT< it was so grippin i couldn't stop readin it
person Asilin
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so will Kagome's promise be revealed to the whole gang before it happens? or will that just be another way of suspense? neway...good chapter! update soon, please!
person Asilin
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so will Kagome's promise be revealed to the whole gang before it happens? or will that just be another way of suspense? neway...good chapter! update soon, please!
person Asilin
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so will Kagome's promise be revealed to the whole gang before it happens? or will that just be another way of suse? se? neway...good chapter! update soon, please!