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This is a great story but you have cut so much out why did you and don't say you haven't ive read most of it once then you updated and now ot os diffrent Oh! well update soon please

I'm actually so easily pleased I can't find anything wrong with your story. But I do know a good story when I read it. Also, I think I'v actually seen Kagome act a bit like that before. But, what do I know. Well anyway what I do know is that this story is very good. If this is a rough draft then I can't wait to see the revised version.
Ja ne

PLEASE update!!! I love your story!!!

Honostly i didnt really find anything that i didnt like i mean spelling and stuff is normal cuz everyone has a little bit of spelling problems in their stories its like inevitable!lol but i honostly love your story and it was the first one i added to my rec. reading list! i absolutly cant live without ur story it is just amazing!!! Really i love it and hope you update it soon!!-sesshysgirl08-

Wah! You mean I'm going to have to do this all over again? Are you trying to kill me woman? It's bad enough you FAILED to keep your promise of updating faster, *glare* but now you're planning on rewriting and updating the whole story! *falls off chair in a slump* Don't *sniff* I *tear* give *hitched breath* you love? Faithfully? Okay, I'm better, at least give us fair warning as to when you do the rewrite and updates, pwetty pweese!

On to the other comments! You're right about this story lacking something. I'm not quite sure what it is, but you seem like you've lost your edge when it comes to dealing with the character interactions. You know the thing that says "I'm not just another crossover fic" That came out badly didn't it? No, I don't mean you've stereotyped the characters, but that oomph is slowing down.... almost like you're not as interested in the story. I have to re-read the damned thing and make sure I'm not blowing smoke, but that is how it feels to me. Not to mention my original crusade of "MORE SESSHOMARU!!!" Sorry, couldn't resist.

Hoping your holidays kick ass!

Hey Som,
Just wanted to tell you great story, and I that I can't wait untill the next chapters are up. Also I've been following your story for about 2 months now and I think it is one of the best crossover fan-fics I have ever read. It's too bad there are hardly any Kagome/Heie parings because they are hot!!!!! Keep up the good work.

Yay - you're back!!!! Okay, disturbances in the plot....hmmm, I like it so far, so I'm not so sure - but if you do make alot more changes, how will we know what's important, what you've inserted and the sort if we've loyally *bats eyelashes innocently* read so far? -Jazz-

Ah! A ghost! Oh wait you’re alive! I knew you were, *Discreetly takes down memorial*
Well I’m so happy to actually read something from you that the length of this one can be ignored (for now). But it’s unforgivable how you ended the chapter like that! Haven’t we suffered in wait long enough? Haven’t we been patient? Haven’t they gotten the clue to stop making Land Before Time movies yet?

~The jaded one

What! Nooo ho ho ho! You can't stop there[ch.awakening]I've waited so long,and it was just getting good.I must have more No I will have more!!!!(Suddenly slaps self in the face) Sorry about that now where was I going to start? Oh yes, now I remember. First off I just want to say thankyou so much for taking the time out of what I am sure is a busy life to share your wonderful stories with everyone, and to tell you how much I enjoy okay lets be honest love your stories check almost every day to see if you've updated.It really kinda gives me something else to look forward to. I mean don't worry I'm not obsessed or anything and I do have a life. I guess when youve been faced with and still are faced with such hard reality you just have to find away to escape, and since I refuse to drink or do drugs reading is my escape. I'm addicted to reading and I could be happier having it be that way . Reading gives me hope..so in away you give me hope so I just wanted to say thank you. (looks around)I any any of my friend this they ethier faint from shock, check my temp. to see if I was sick, or fall to the floor laughing. So anyways I loved your lemon god that was hot and just so you know it's driving me crazy not knowing whats going to happen next. Sssoo PLLZz up date soon ok thats all I wanted to say( I still can't believe wrote this [even though I do mean every word].)So I going to shut up now (Finaly) and say good bye.....BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [signed] Loki

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you updated!! I can assure you that it was most certainly worth the wait.
cant wait till the next chapter
have a good one
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