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for Paradox

by Somnambulicious

person sesshysgirl08
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is reslly good so far...im rereading it since u changed it a bit. the only thing i noticed that was wrong in here was the spelling of Kuwabara's name its Kuwabara. ^_^ other than that im loving it!! please update soon!!!-sesshysgirl08-
person sesshysgirl08
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYY!! im sooo happy its almost done!! this story was well worth the wait though! i love it and i hope to read 18 soon...but beleave me im not trying to sound like im rushing you...if i do you have my permision to take away all of my cookies and ramen. lol. anyway...this story is great!! keep up the awesome work!!!-sesshysgirl08-
person Puppy
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chibi Jagan... the image refuses to banish itself from my poor little brain.

*guruguruguru*
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You got really lazy during chapter 12. I would revise it if I were you.
person Gem
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading everything written so far, and I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed it thus far. It just plain good. The story and the writing just carry you along so you do not want to stop reading. I will be watching for the next update.
person Knight2
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I haven't seen Yu Yu Hakusho, but fic seems ok. Will there be more pairings? And what about Inuyasha? I'm intrested to see when these questions are answered.
person Diane
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this although there are a couple of goofs in chapter 1, Kurama's hair is flaming red not black & the correct spelling of the orange haired guy's name is Kuwabara not Kurabara. Hope this helps.
person Princess
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! VERY IMPRESSIVE START!!!
person Princess
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! THIS just keeps getting better and better!!!
person Princess
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I can't wait for Kagome to tell Hiei about her deal with Sesshoumaru!