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for Paradox

by Somnambulicious

person LadyOfTheWest
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW! What a great update! You blend them so well together, if I didnt know any better I would think they were supposed to be like this. Two things that really jumped out to me were Inu's thoughts as he is yelling at Kagome and Hihei's comments to Kurama. Both I felt were very much IC responses and things they would do. Can't wait to read the next update!
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the best crossover fics I've ever read. IY/YYH are my two all time favorite animes. I love your style of writing and I think the dialogue is priceless, especially between Kurama and Youko. I just laughed my ass off. You have a natural sense of humor that's very refreshing. I was just so impressed with the whole thing so far. Please update as soon as possible. s fis fic is a definate treasure. Oh, and I don't care if Hiei or Kurama gets Kagome. I love both demons, but I may lean a little bit more towards Hiei getting the girl only because Kurama has his pick from his hoard of fangirls, LOL. Anyway, great writing, can't wait for more.
person Caliko
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YUM! Left me drooling for more! OH boy... a concerned Inuyasha, a concerned Kagome, and an indifferent Hiei.. hmmm.. the posibillities are leaving me with hentai daydreams..... @_@ This is bad news for my classwork.. lol ~Caliko
person J
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I likey I likey, verily much so..... you must update, and soon...... oh yeah are there going to be any differences between the story as posted here, and how it is posted on fanfiction.net? anyways keep up the great work.
person caliko
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg.. this is deliciously different... as for my preference - Kurama/kagome/youko (spelling?) Poor Kurama never get's enough action. I guess that's cause he looks too sweet.. lol..(we all know better, since he'll kill almost as easily as Hie would) Anyway - whatever you end up doing will be good! ^_^ ~ Caliko
person Kris
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To be completely honest, I've only seen like.. one episode of YYH. But I do like Kurama. Grrrr-ow! hehe. Even so, this looks to be a very promising story. I liked the sparring match at the end, especially. Great work, I look forward to reading more of this soon! :)
person RavenTears
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! you have to update tommorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Mija
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg soo loving this fic and yes yes yes make it Hiei/Kag please??? but either way you go I will love it cause I do love Kurama and I soooooo am in love with Inu and he is my first choice of course lol, anyhow great chapter please update soon, pretty please? dont see many crossovers anymore I would love to read more, anyhow great work cant wait for more till then be well safe and cool much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)