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for Paradox

by Somnambulicious

person LadyOfTheWest
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Arghhhh! What a horrible thing to do! :snickers: That was such a huge cliff hanger! Keep up the great work!
person Antina
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story is pretty neat. But I wonder if Kagome will end up with Kurama instead of Hiei. I think Kurama will be better for Kagome. But that is my onipon. Just do what you think is right and update this story soon.
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start. I particularly enjoyed Youko's singing...Rather reminded me of Shigure's (Fruits Basket) rather elegantly perverse nature.
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Caught red handed. I'm wondering how Kagome will react to Hiei. 'Eek don't hurt me Mr. Gravity-Defying-Hair' or 'Hya! Don't mess with a Miko/Taijiya in training' while escaping back down the rabbit-hole so to speak. I'll be watching to find out!
person Jaded Neko
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am basking in total awesomeness!
Yeah I was suppose to be doing my homework when I first started reading, but I just couldn't stop! I figure it won't hurt if I have to repeat one class.
Keep it up!
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story
i think im off to you you other stories
lol
thanks for the great read
person Jessjess
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That's the fiirst time I got a response from an author! Whoohoo! My day is complete! Okay, so sort of knowing what is going to happen is giving me jitters, well that or the chocolate peanutbutter cake I ate at six this morning, and I can't wait! You know if Kouga, the two gangs and seemingly Naraku are all going to have confrontations don't you think that Youko and Sesshomaru should meet? Those two seem to have a lock on the "I'm older, wiser, and infinitely superior" attitude. Ack, I'm bad! Promise, no more interfering in your story, just reviews, but I still love it.
person thebeautybehindthemask
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heyy i've read your story its excellent your grammer is adequete and so is the storyline. i like the kurama/youko/kagome pairing alittle more than the hiei /kagome pairing.you could make it a love triangle perhaps?
but whatever u choose is good enough for me. i have a request for youis pis possible for u to post up this story at mediaminer.org because sometimes login to this site is difficult over the nexcess thing.keep up the good work update soon!
person Jessjess
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles* This story seems like it has all kinds of possibilities just waiting for opportunities. I'd like to see the pairings go either way, how's that for indecisive. Ooh, and just wait til Inuyasha finds out! I can't wait to see the confrontation between him and Hiei, or possobly the two groups! *Hn, can't talk any more too busy dreaming* Bye!
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yayay i found a new kick ass fanfic to read thanks
its real good so far.
cant wait for the next update