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I really like this fanfic! Please update soon!

Great story!
E-mail me when you update!
And... well... Update!!!

man your so freakin awesome
you update your story so much
thank the gods for arthurs like you!!!
i cant wait for the next one
cya

omg two chaps and they were awsome, soo loving this story I can so see this in my head and I cant wait I wants more, please let it be a Kags/Hiei pairing but if not I do understand, you have such a way with diologue, cant spell so sue me, ok dont but anyhow my sing ing but but anyway you have a way with wordd thd the plot is sooo good I cant wait for further updates I know you may not be able to but can you email me if you update?? if not so k I will check back when AFF lets me on..lol...good fic keep it up your doing a great job I soo love this ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

I'm glad you liked my suggestion. I suppose though, reading your solution, that 'freeze' is a better way to keep Hiei on track. He'd probably throw a hissy if he kept on getting smashed into things. ^.^ I liked the display of Kagome as a kick-ass chick. It really does justice to her character to have her whoopin' some thugs...in the nude no less. I'm curious to see what happens now that Kurama's discovered the little 'paradox' in place. It looks like the cat is out of the bag... or kitsune is out of the pocky.

AAARRGG! I can't believe I missed an update! Luckily, I caught up with this one. To answer your question about the speed of the story; no, I don't think you are going too fast. I want to see the confrontation and, who doesn't want a lemon, *rolls eyes* but I'd rather have a good background first. Without that this may as well be a PWP. I think you did well with Jinenji personally, I liked him in the story. You know if Kurama and Kagome get together *little chibi reviewer in the backgroud stomping and yelling "You promised!"* he'd have to take her to visit him. By the way, the whole Hiei and Sesshomaru thing can be easily resolved with the way the story is going, with Hiei killing so many youkai Sesshomaru would want to investigate wouldn't he? The food call has been given, I must away!

This story is good! But is the pairing Hiei and Kagome? Please write as fast as possible for the next chapter. You should be an author at fanfiction.net as well. I bet you will have many, MANY reivews. Well gotta go!

YOUR FAN

CHICKIE

hey woot you update fast
thanks for that
i really enjoyed it
cant wait for the next one

Nice first technical meeting between Kagome and Hiei. I liked how she could throw him off balance with her comments. Her direct honesty was surprising though as I'd half expected her to go 'Well? What well?' and try and keep it under wraps. It will be interesting to see what kind of subduing spell gets sed oed on Hiei. Personally I like the word 'baka' as the fall word...

*Imagining*

Kagome: InuYasha no BAKA!
Hiei *thud*
InuYasha-tachi sans Miko: What was that?
Kagome: Squirrel? ^.^0

Can't wait to see what happens next!

omg the last two chapters totally rocked...the diologue was hilarious between Hiei, Kurama and Youko, totally had me laughing and Hiei all excited about finally finding something interesting about Kagome hehe...what can I say except that I sooooo cant wait for the next chap, I know its hiei looking at her and will they fight??? ooh soo many questions and soo much wanting to know so update soon k??? great fic love it ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)