Reviews for Paradox - Inuyasha - AFF Fiction Portal

person Jessjess

schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM

You know the one thing I absolutely love about YYH is the fact that not a single one of them is a perfect person. In fact, I think that's what makes them the perfect team. Kudos to the one who figured it out in writing! Sneaky kitsune are so much more fun to play with.
You know the worst thing about that painting? Tinkerbell is a foot and a half tall! *shudders* I don't have anything against Disney, but she's just so cliche!
I was all excited when I read about the dark, shadowy being in the Makai, until I found out it was NARAKU! I don't think you're trying to work Sesshomaru in here very hard. *sighs* I'll forgive you because it's an awesome story, but geez! To clarify; I am not the world's biggest Sesshomaru fan, but he's just so fun to see the characters interact with. He get's all huffy, they get all puffy and things just explode.
You know, it's awfully hot here in Tucson, so I'll have to cut this off. Too much sweat, my fingers are slipping off the keyboard. Gack! 103!

person LadyOfTheWest

schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Wow three updates and no comment from me, I am soo sorry! Anyways I about died when I read the Sesshy part! Woohoo! Kurama, Sesshy and Hiei all in one fic! It's a fanfic girl's dream come true! You are really flying with these updates and I am so happy for you. Just wanted to comment on the IC/OOC of your story. I thought Kagome was perfectly fluffy and I dont think you strayed too far for mean old Hiei. Overall you have done absolutely wonderful with keeping them as close to realposspossible. In this last update, the part that really struck me was Hiei interrupting Youko/Kurama when he was making a move on Kagome. Now whether or not Hiei would actually be interested in her or not is moot but if he was that would SO be something he would do. I giggled out loud when I read that. Anyways, now I am rambling so keep the updates coming!

person Mija

schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM

omg that was a totally awsome chapter, you werent kidding when you said all hell broke loose, I would of loved to have seen that, and Kagome was right, why did Hiei pull his Katana on Inu, knowing Inu was only protecting Kagome??? well DUH Mija...because Kurama is his friend and he knows that Inu has a temper, what he can do with that sword, and that he would kill for Kagome...ok just answered my own question. yes I do so love to talk to myself..*I say sarcasticly* sigh anyhow great great chapter I cant wait for more, I have to have more, I cant wiat to see what happenes and oooh its soo cute that Hiei is a bit jealous and protective of Kagome..hehe...and ty ty ty sooo much for emailing me about your update ty ty ty...can you do it again??? would much appreciate it...again ty great chapter keep up the great work, and I dont know if youve read any of her work but Scottishfae writes crossovers between IY and YU YU, I love her writing..cant wait for more much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

person Jessjess

schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM

AHAHAHA! I almost fell off of my chair when I saw the Rocky reference! That was great, give the hubby a congrats from me. I guess I can just count out the Sesshomaru meeting unless you plan to do it when they go back for the others, won't I. *sighs* I was so looking forward to that. I'll forgive the whole Kag/Hiei thing since I did say I wouldn't care either way didn't I. Besides *winks* he's a sexy little bishe isn't he? All bishe need love! That could be the name of your site, which sounds interesting BTW. Know the feeling with the kids. Got two little monkeys of my own, they love walls too. *Big sigh* I should never have painted that mural for my Mother-in-Law in front of them. *walks away grumbling "Stupid Tinkerbell and Bambi....* See ya soon!

person Belle