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by Somnambulicious

person Jaded Neko
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you that I loved this lately?
Hehe, primal instincts are getting the better of everyone! Hiei's cute when he's possessive!
Um well as cute as a short demon could go, but can't complain I'm short too. :( and as a short person I must stand up for all the other shorties in the world! Vertically challenged unite...and sit on our asses and watch Adult Swim.
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol do you know how much you sound like the arthur of By another name ( i think thats the title)
you talout out how the characters take the story where they want, and all that good stuff.
she does the exact same, interesting...hmm i guess that how all good writers write. lol
well good chapter thanks for the update
cya
person JuniperJazz
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I realllllly love this pairing...even though I'm rather unfamiliar with Kurama and Hiei. I'm believing it. Plus, I think my ignorance is probably for the better...Any way, can't wait for your next update!!!
person sesshysgirl08
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW U NEVER STOP AMAZING ME!!!! YR THE BEST!!! you did a great job on this chapter and i hope u update soon cause i absolutly LOVE this story. So umm please update soon and if u would please let me know when u update. Just incase you still need my e-mail its bloomlover_2010@hotmail.com
person Jessjess
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*deep breath* Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou! *big adorable chibi eyes* I wuv you! Yay, you got Sexy Sessy in there after all Kurama's a womanizing bastard with only a little more finesse than Miroku, and they're all going to save the world! I can sleep happy tonight.
Did I annoy you with the Sesshomaru begging? I noticed my name at the top of the chapterhe! he! I am evil you know. Anyway, when I saw my name I ran into the house and screamed for joy and generally made myself an idiot, it was great. Why yes, I am a loon.
I agree about the whole Inuyasha/Looney Toons thing. My son knows all the Dragon Ball Z, YYH, and Inu characters and people just look at me and gasp "Aren't those shows too violent?" To which I reply " I would rather have my kids throw imaginary fireballs than have to go te the hospital when one decides to hit the other with a frying pan because they saw it on tv!" Oh and yes, my son does try to do the Kamehameha attack from DBZ. It's a ri Tha Thanks for the invite, but I am one of those sick people who actually enjoys the heat. *gasp, the horror!* I spent too many years in the snow. Tucson great in the fact that it stays warm-hot most of the year without humidity and when winter comes we can go up Mt Lemon to visit snow, but it rarely visits us! Enough for the dry (pardon the pun) lesson.
Hmmm, daughter + sword = no boyfriends, your husband must be thrilled. It probably will equal holes in the furniture anddrapdrapes. Might want to stop that one from happening. Good Luck!

P.S. Thank you again!
person Mija
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh Nooo this story is not going to fast its going along just fine, you have the right amount of description and tale to go with it the way you are, I love it the last two chaps as always totally rocked they were awsome and I sooo love when My Hiei is jealous, hehe totally funny when he interuppted Kags and Kurama/Youko,,,hehe and the entrance of Sesshy was totally awsome I loved it I sooooo cant wait to read more loving this fic and thanking you for updaint me and emailing me on said updates pleas if you can continue to do so ty ty ty ty much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so wonderful. I just can't seem to get enough of it. I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner, but I have a habit of printing up your updates to read in a more comfortable setting and by the time I go back to the computer to review, you've update yet another chapter. How do you write so fast, I'm amazed, well I'm finally all caught up with your story and I want to say that I think you are one of the most talented writers I've come across. You are a true storyteller and I feel honored to be reading one of your fics. The way've 've managed to keep the characters all 'in character' so easily, is amazing to me. I can't wait for Hiei and Kag to hook up. I'm glad the you brought Sess into story as well. I wonder if Koga will give up his shards so easily. I would think that he would insist on being in on the final battle, since he has a score to settle with Naraku as well. I would be sad to see Koga left out in the end. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck.
person xoulblade
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love crossovers with Kagome and another character, mostly...Sesshomaru, Kurama, or Hiei. I like your story so far, but whos the pairing going to be or are your going to sise ise us :D. Anyway all my girls (3) love Inuyasha, all I hear from them is, "SIT BOY!" They have watched the shows I have taped off of the cartoon network (ages: 13, 7, & 5) Keep updating!!
person sesshysgirl08
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! please tell me the citrus is between kag/hiei. o i hope so!!! please update soon and this story is THE BEST EVER ITS AWSOME!!!!!!If you would please let me kno when you put up ur next chapter that would be great.its bloomlover_2010@hotmail.com. Thanx and please o please update soon
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wOOOOT another chapter, your welcome for the link.
just wondering how long do you plan to keep this storying going. as in chapter wise?