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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God-Boy is going to cry.
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PWEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's great! Now continue the fic or I will throw rabid stuffed bunnies at you, so please continue (because I only have 3 rabid stuffed bunnies right now, but I'll get more!). Bye Bye Author Person. ;)
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wee, I liked it. Kinda short, but I liked it. Update soon, I wanna know what happens! ^^!!! I'm a strong Inu/Sess lover, so, this fic is perfect xD yAy!!!! Update ASAP!!!! ^____^
TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAVE TO UP DATE, FOR MY SAKE IF NOONE ELSES!!!!! PLEASE, THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!!! AND UPDATE AS OFTEN AS YOU CAN!!!!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay, I'll say that this has a lot of promise, but you should work on detailing. Try to think of something, anything that could flesh out the word count a little more and tell people what's going on in more depth. Once you start doing that, it becomes more and more just part of what you normally do.
If you want to improve, try going to a story-style RPG site and making at least a 150 word post each time. You'll find that after a while you'll start writing 300-word posts is easy, and those 150-worders seem short in comparison. Those RPGs are a great way to improve your writing style ^.^
If you want to improve, try going to a story-style RPG site and making at least a 150 word post each time. You'll find that after a while you'll start writing 300-word posts is easy, and those 150-worders seem short in comparison. Those RPGs are a great way to improve your writing style ^.^
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that it is unusual, but you have to admit that Sess is sexy fine. I ust need for you to write some more.