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person Inuzands
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start, especially on your first fanfic! Your descriptions are very well done and I like the setting that you've chosen, especially the vet idea. Just watch for some very minor spelling errors, but hey, that's no big deal. Keep up the excellent writing, and I very much look forward to reading more soon!
person SkatCat
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this first chapter!Cool idea haveing Kagome being a vet, very cute.
Can't wait till the next chap!

^_^
person Rider
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it lov dthe image of kagome sleeping at the desk I found myself that sleepers fall into to catagories angels and the droolers*laugh8 looking forward to reading more keep up the great work