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by theMaven

person AzureHart
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I hope you update soon.
person New Fan
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rin. She love her lord but apparently the feelings are not the same. Will Kagome and Sango's myth be proven truthful or
just what it is "a myth". I hope there will be a happy ending for Rin becasue of the lost of Jaken and even Kohaku. She had
a chance with Kohaku and she gave that up. Great chapter. Update soon. ^_^
person Persephone of Abydos
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do Ah-Un and Rin point of views really really well. I can't wait for the Sesshoumaru point of view! ^-^
person animegirl007
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.....I really like the part about Jaken bragging about his many women....that was funny...and Sango was really mean in this fic...I never thought of Sango being against Rin and Sesshomaru....I can't wait to read your last chapter.....
person Mischief
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool....you're writing another one! I always love all your stories. Please update soon!!
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! You never fail to disappoint me. Not only is the idea orignal, but it's just as well written as your others. I have NEVER seen a fic from Ah-Un's point-of-veiw. I can't wait for any other chapters you may put in!!
person animegirl007
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again....its a winner!!!!!!!......I felt really bad for Jaken dieing the way he did.....and Ah-Un talking that was a stroke of f genius..UPDATE SOON
person New Fan
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I like it because I gee aee another POV from someone who is close to Rin and Sesshoumaru. I can not wait to read
the next chapter. Update soon. P.S. miss your stories.
person youkai tsuki
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story, as usual. Very unusual to see a fic from the dragons POV.
But I see you stepped up te che challenge and delivered. It was nice to see that even
through the years that Jaken antagonized Rin, she still had a fond spot for him in her
heart. I await your next chapters.

Tsuki
person GreaterBeast_Xellas
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok this is making me cry. Update soon.