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This was breathtaking, I am still crying from it.

I absoloutly loved that chapter. At the end i cried a little.

Well I read you on ff.net and now here, and I swear i love your fanfictions. This was so good, and the ending made me cry (well not CRY CRY but i had tears in my eyes) I luv Sess/Rin stories, and of course i luv when u write them. Keep up the good Work ^.~
~~>Stalker of Dreamz

This is the most beautiful and Heart wrenching story that I have ever read.
I am shedding tears now as I type this.
This was so emotional. I can't stop crying.
God this story was sad yet happy yet sad.
I can't stop crying.
You did not disappoint.
Did I mention that I am still crying over here?

This story hadbawlbawling. are are one of my favorite authors of fanficton and I always look forward to your Sess/Rin fics. Please keep writing!!

This the most beautifully written story using the POV of the dragons Ah & UN. Oh! Oh! Oh! I am so looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for the joy of reading.

For some reason, I'd seen this story listed and couldn't remember if I read it or not....then realized I didn't.

But I like this, as a matter of fact, I have always liked 'POV' stories as long as it's done well and the writer tries to do a different spin to the story.

Can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru's POV is...oh, and I liked the first part with Ah-Un. The way you made folks think Rin was still a 'young girl', where do you get your ideas from?

nuff' said.

Hello Maven. Even though Sango is infertile she would have allowed Miroku to take Koharu as a second wife so Children could be had, it just the way things were done back then.
Semper Fi.

Dear God, that first chapter was long-winded. I didn't even get halfway through it before skipping to the next. Hint: don't base entire chapters around exposition and dialogue. Writing needs a good balance of dialogue and prose, specifically action in the prose, to keep the story moving. Happily, the second chapter was well-written with both prose and dialogue and actually went somewhere.

Your writing is far superior to that of the majority of "authors" on this site and you show clear talent and potential. Your skills just need some honing, I think. Practice makes perfect, so continue writing.

This is a great story. Very heart felt and sincere. I really like how you have the slow progression of homahomaru and Rin's relationship instead of having him practically jump her when she comes of age like most other stories. Please update soon and keep up the great work!!