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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a sad story... I liked it...
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so beautifully written. I love the way you have the dragons Ah-Un thinking. You have a way with your POV's. Very, Very Well Written. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed this.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You did a wonderful job with this fic. I can't imagine anyone doing a better job than this. Somehow, it just feels r. D. Don't stop writing, you have a unique and fresh way of telling Sesshoumaur and Rin's story. It made me feel good all over.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story very much, but there are 2 things I will mention...
One, in chapter 3, it confused me when you did the flashbacks. I didn't know when it started or stopped.
Two, also in 3, I loved how Sesshoumaru was doing a count on how many to kill and not to kill, until he was basically like, F@#% it! Kill them all! I thought that was clever.
nuff said...
One, in chapter 3, it confused me when you did the flashbacks. I didn't know when it started or stopped.
Two, also in 3, I loved how Sesshoumaru was doing a count on how many to kill and not to kill, until he was basically like, F@#% it! Kill them all! I thought that was clever.
nuff said...
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read one of your stories, I end staring at the computer screen in awe and clutching a wad of kleenex. lol I've read this start to finish 3 times now (had to print it out). I absolutely love your insight reagrding youkai, you seem to have a gift of bringing Sessh's character to life.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a short and very beautiful Fiction *sweps away the tears* Thank you so much ^_^ Taiki
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You had to go and make me cry didn't you? It was a beautiful story. Thanks for writing it.
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always your writing was beautiful...You are so my inspiration in trying to write better......I can't wait until your next story......and as always I'm getting my good cry on...your story constantly get me emtional.......KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That took a lot of love to write. It reminds me of the times when my husband was away. Now once again he is gone to Iraq.
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Simply put, that was beautiful. Thank you. A most enjoyable read. *