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for Red Snow

by bijouxdelalune04

person animegirl007
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally able to review.....I still really like your story...I can't wait to see what next....update soon
person Luna Stargazer
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and have thoroughly enjoyed it so far. It's always nice to see Sesshomaru x Rin fanfics ^^ Bualmoalmost all of them seem to be with Rin growing up as a fighter or a AU. I've been looking for one where she actually grows up while staywithwith Jaken and Sesshomaru-sama.

Hmm...anway, very nice job. Keep up the fantastic work, Tamashi-san.
person youkai mistress
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK I have to ask...what's up with all the question marks in this chapter? You used them in the most random places. You even used them when you were using a contraction. Instead of can't, you put can?t. I don't understand it! I really like you story but it kind of made it hard to read.
person Taje
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have read the first 4 chapters of this story. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease, write more. Thanks for sharing your imagination.
person angel of light
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yea I totaly love this story it is really awsome
you just have to write more.
person LoganSaj
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The '?' marks BURN my eyes!! IT HURTSSS!! You need to find a way to fix that. Good story, Write more, and quickly.
person No Sugar Added
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are so very evil. This is turning out to be a good fic- write more or I'll...um...get you. :-D
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o my good what is going on. i hate been in college but look at it this way when you get the good job and the car i would be all good and some chip.
person Haley
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!!!!!! NO YOU CANT DELETE IT!!!!!!!!!! I abloloutly love this story PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE please please please please please try to post the next chapter as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person darklady
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update first write song fic later! your story is just getting really interesting!