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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooo! must update soon this is fantastic and i really like it so pls update soon!!!!!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oOoOoOoh uuuuuupdate please fast i like the story
please do a juicy lemon pleassssssssssssssse
r kag and inu going to be together?
please do a juicy lemon pleassssssssssssssse
r kag and inu going to be together?
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dear god!!!!! okay, i am really dissapointed. this is amazing...i have never read a story like this before, honestly. the graphic description, the character dramaziations, the personailites, the complete change from our normal heros...it's amazing. i have never read anything like this!!! then...when it gets so awsome...its done. WTF???? dude, if you let this go...........it would be an honest shame to the literary world...of fan fic of course, but never mind that. you have such a handle on this story that its groveling. honestly, very few people out there can control a story the way you have here. its amazing, point blank. i am rather picky about stories, being a writer myself, that i give such high points to, and this is very near the top of my list. i implore you, finish it...at least continue it. its amazing.
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo! Great fic! I love the tension building up between Kagome and Inuyasha? Gasp! What will happen next? I must know! Please update as soon as you can...this fic is fabulous!
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. beautifully written. Great insight and original new twist to the whole best friends scenario. Hope to read more soon! :)
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:P update please!!!!!!!
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Honestly Shilley, Neko thinks you're a very talented writted. I honestly was in awe when I was reading, and the dramatic movements and descriptions you embed in this story is purely captivatinhe lhe last chapter really took a grip on my emotions, and it's fics like these that I love reading. Very good storyline, everything just deserves nothing less than 5 stars. :3 I'm still a little caught up.. that last chapter.. wow. Anyway, Neko has smacked this fic into recommended reading, and I shall be stalking for updates :P Love and huggles to you!
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods! sex sexual tension b/w Inu and Kag is ridiculous! It's shooting straight out of my my computer screen...and yet, for whatever reason Inu is with Kikyo?!?
What the heck.
I'm guessing it won't be for long.
Man, Kags left Inu for someone else but he ended up with her sister! That's so WRONG!
Argh..I want an Inu_kag lemon soon...the tension is killing me. Please :)
What the heck.
I'm guessing it won't be for long.
Man, Kags left Inu for someone else but he ended up with her sister! That's so WRONG!
Argh..I want an Inu_kag lemon soon...the tension is killing me. Please :)
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh... Me likeh! Good ggoodgood. Makin' Inu and Kag do the naughty? Shwee, very shwee. >.> Hehe. Yay for abusive kisses!
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, i know that your the author and so can write however you feel neccessary but i feel like i should tell you a few things. firstly, the grammer adn spelling and word choice is off sometimes. this doesn't bother some people but it does bother some so i was just letting you know that some mistakes escaped your notice. secondly, you language is very very overly flowery. while at points it sounds goadn adn they are good!- sometimes, its just too much of a good thing, y'know? i liked the plot developmend tnd the realistic portrayl of how truly gross getting drunk is.