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for Just the Two of Us

by bansheepuppet

schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really awesome fight, GO MIROKU. I'm so glad that my Koga has been saved, thank you. Now I can't wait for Koga and Miroku to get together. YUM YUM.
person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome threesome. I know how hard threesomes are to write and they take forever. I love Koga, and by the way, his friends names are Ginta and Hakkaku. Just thought you might want to know for future stories ^_^ I can't wait for Koga to find ku. ku. We know that once Miroku gets started with Koga he'll be so gentle and sweet. Great story. Well I have to go and finish my fic. CYA
person ColShaLin
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOO!! Ok, that was just as good. Forget I asked for anything else. Great scene!! I like the idea of having Miroku hold back a little too. And I totally know what you mean about keeping track of everyboI haI had to keep rereading to remember where everyones hands and mouths were when I wrote my last threesome!! Great job, more soon!
person Special K
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nyo! No to be continued! I must find out what happens next!!! I think I told you this when I e-mailed you, but I'll say it again- This is my favorite Inuyasha fic ever!!! You must update again!!!!
person ColShaLin
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More more more more!!! I so love your story! I love the developing feelings in Kouga and can't wait to get a little of Miroku's point of view, too! Totally love your Viper youkai, but I'm glad they're out of the picture so the real angst can begin. Hehehehe!
person dragonkitty
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is soo nice i love it^^ i never actually thought of a Miroku Kouga paring quite interesting. and i liked how you made the viper demons. They didn't seem to be...well crappy demons I liked them. you gave them a society and all.^^ I'm interested in how well the relationship between Kouga and Miroku progress. I can't wait for the next update!
person Hentai Kitti Koko
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tottaly awsome fic I love it so far please continue ya know wrighting for me is kinda dificult I shuldent evin be on the computer so update for the disabeled person!!
person Kenageko
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just love your story. It is just so full of angtsy-goodness. I think I'm in love with you[r mind]. ^_^ I've always been drawing to Kouga as a character mayecauecause Ryoga from Ranma. He always seems like a more confident version. Shi'en is a bad man but I must admit his tactics are effective. O_o
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Another great chappie. My heart wrenched for Koga. I felt his embarrassment and shame when he realized the dinner guests where his friends, well except for Inu, lol. I'm loving that Miroku is going to fight for Koga's freedom "GO MIROKU!!!!!" But, ya know, even if Miroku doesn't win, which would be very unlikely given the fact that he can use his wind tunnel to suck up the nasty snake youkai, Inu can still kick all of their asses, BIG TIME. I can't wait to read what happens during the fight for Koga's freedom.
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, GREAT story so far! I love the OC's and the depth of the info we have on them. Great torture too. Isn't it amazing when this stuff starts coming out of our heads and we're like, "Whoa, did I write th Whe Where did that dirty stuff come from??" Anyway, you've got my attention, I'll be patiently waiting for updates.
Done yet? O.o