rate_review Reviews

this story jumps around a lot without an explanation of how the situation started. in other words, there are holes in between the chapters and it's hard to understand.

ASOTA

This seems like an interesting story, except the formatting is so...off. There are whole passages missing from the ends of chapters, making them cut off which really throws off the pace of the story and leaves a lot of plot holes and gaps in between. And there was a major skip in the middle of one chapter.
I really suggest you go through and correct these.

i have much love for you writers. I don't konw if it was the problem with th aff.net data base or what but i really can't follow you story. it confuses me. you just jump from scene to scene without warning. I just can't keep up. =(

Thanks for posting that author's note. I went to that other Boy-Toy site and was finally able to read the rest of this story, plus a few others.
I really love this story. It wasn't what I was expecting at all though. I knew that in the last two chapters Sesshomaru would be in it, and someone would get a favor, but from only those clues...it wasn't what I was expecting at ALL. Not to say I didn't like it though...heh heh heh.
Actually I thought that Miroku would ask Sesshomaru to mate Kouga so that he'd always have a scent on him. Boy, oh boy, did I get a surprise. A nice surprise, but a shock none the less.
Can't you tell how dedicated I am to reading this story. I only last reviewed like, what, two days ago? And it would have been even sooner but my computer started fucking up (no pun intended).
Anyway, keep writing, because this is one of my favorite stories, and I'll die if you just...stop. Oh, that would be a nightmare! (Do you think I need to get a life?) As it stands, I'm begging you to continue this story, even if it's only for me!!! ^_^ I'm your number one fan, and you wouldn't leave me hanging, now would you? ...I didn't think so! ^_^

I really love your story, but now the chapters are messed up. I can only read a few paragraphs in the last 2 chapters (which are the ones I haven't read yet). All the other chapters are messed up but that doesn't matter to me because I've already read them. But it totally irks me that I can't read the last 2 chapters (with Sesshomaru and the favor and stuff). Maybe you could reload it again or something, that might help. PLEASE!!! This is like my favorite story and I've been dying of anticipation to know what happens!!!

Um, dude, what the hell is going on? How come all of your chapters are cut into pieces? I can't really read the latest chapter since...well...I only see about half a document page's worth of writing. And then I notice that all your chapters are messed up. What's up with that?

Are you seriously stopping THERE?!?!? OMG! I have to know what you are planning to do with Sesshoumaru.....even though I do have a couple of ideas of my own.....Keep up the good work!

Sesshy??? Cool that is really unexpected. Yeah you're right I already have an idea of my own. But please update soon! I cannot wait to see if what I am thinkin is true. ^_^

I enjoyed your fic and would like to know when you post the next chappie please...keep up the good work kay!?

Ja Ne

You better come out with the next chappie soon! I love this fic and want to know what is going to happen between Miroku and Sesshoumaru, sooo plz be nice to MY Kouga and post that next chappie!!

Ja