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for Slave of a slave

by Yusuke3001

person ChaosD
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finish updating it soon! I never really see any Kagura fics and especially one wit Kagome. Its fularious and its an awesome story.
person sangoforever
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great
person sangoforever
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great
person Lun6669
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Very Creative, all the moves all the toys! Its just pur great!!! Chapter 3 is just the greatest, Please tell me if theres MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lun6669
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Kagome is in a situation INDEED LOL!!! Im loving this like crazy plz keep writing its too great!!! Oh ya, one more thing "THREESOME THREESOME THREESOME!!!"
person Bbabe18
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's good!! Oh, and a Sango, Kagura, Kagome pairing would be alright, but it would have to be like Sango, and Kagura would dominate her, and she would take turns like one chapter with Sango, one chapter with Kagura, and one chapter with both of them. Remember it must have her submit, not her dominate, and if you do that i would add points for making it a threesome. any yuri pairing would do as long as Kagome was the main character. Tell all your friends about this challenge, and please do the threesome with multiple chapters as well as a couple of chapters for this story, and try to make the lemons hardcore, longscriscriptive, and did i mention long? Thanks.
person Bbabe18
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good, but remember my other review please, it will get you extra points if you do the story that way, and if you tell your friends about the contest.
person sangoforever
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story
person Lun6669
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is like watching a episode of Inuyasha! The elements and everthing match what the show produces! So far this is a very creative story and I hope chapter 2 is just as creative or better as chapter 1. I'm really looking foreword to chapter 2 can't wait to read it!
person ec
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more.update please. i love this story