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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
shadowninja88 is mentaly....what's the right word?.....aha! I think "retarded" works about as well as anything else, seriously, why did he put that pathetic excuse of a chapter up in the first place? Oh well the rest of the story was pretty interesting though. PLEASE CONTINUE WITH YOUR STORY!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update plz, this is an awesome story
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to ask, what the hell is up with that last chapter?
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i assume that this was taken up by another author but after it not being updated in a year what's up with the last chapter that can't even be called a chapter? hope the story can be updated and done right unlike the stupid chapter 4
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but two pieces of advice for you. Fill in the small gap between the end of Chapter one and the beginning of chapter two if you can please? And also seperate the beginnings of the chapters from your Author's Notes. It was a great story and I look forward to reading more.
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is... interesting, I guess. Please continue it.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful and also very sweet. Hurry with the next capter cause it is getting better.Send an email or just post it up as fast as u can.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was good but... WHAT THE FUCK!! FIRST THE STORY STARTS LIKE RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE DISCLAIMER THEN THIS HARRY POTTER STORY FALLS IN THE MIDDLE AND THEN THE STORY ABOUT KAG/KAGURA STARTS OVER!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.2 is seriously messed up. It not only starts off with missing parts, theres another story piece in the middle with Hermione, then it repeats the begining.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this please update soon