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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg. *cringes with anticipation* I really don't know how to put all my thoughts about this story in one simple review! [ So this is gonna be one hell of a long review...^^ Sorry!] It's amazing! Hm, lets start about the first things that shocked me: First of all, I find the idea of writting about Sho-kun's [wow...I like that nickname, I think i'll steal it from you, if you don't mind xD;; ] past and such is a GREAT idea. There are a very select few of those in FF.net and AFF.net, and as for those I've read, this is, without any second thoughts, the best one so far! Your plot is amazing, all the twist and turns are so captivating! I started this fic last night and since then I've been taking every moment of my spare time to finish it :D!
Wee. Now, a second thing that I enjoy are the characters and their personalities. Jano, Nami and Ta-kun are simply marvelous. I love them so much xD Expecially Ta-un and Nami, I see so much of myself in those two characters! I'm also quite fond of Izitaki and Ari [it felt kinda weird reading his name in this fic, as it's mine too xDD! I never thought of nameing a male char. 'Ari', either :3 But I got used to it after a few chapters.] , aswell as the great Daimyo himself. [ And lets not forget our beloved Sho-kun <3! ]. One character, though, that I can absolutly NOT stand, would be Chinatsu. [though I beleive that's the reason of her g.] g.] What a kniving little bitch. If I had my way, the mischevious little whore would be torn apart, he remains spralled across the whole fortereP [ P [ Please forgive my gruesome fantasies x3;; I mean no offence ].
^_^; I'm so happy with thy yoy you portayed Sho-kun in his younger years. I would never had pictured him to be like that, but now that I have, I find it suits him marvelously!
Well..this is where my horrendously long review ends. [ it's shorter then i thought it would be =P I hope it was'nt too much of a pain to read!] I look impatiently forward to the next chapter [ Damn the suspence, Damn it I say! ] and be sure that I shall review every single chapter until it ends :D! [ and no, they won't be as long as this on, thank the gods. ]
Truthfulleh yours,
-Talis <3!
Wee. Now, a second thing that I enjoy are the characters and their personalities. Jano, Nami and Ta-kun are simply marvelous. I love them so much xD Expecially Ta-un and Nami, I see so much of myself in those two characters! I'm also quite fond of Izitaki and Ari [it felt kinda weird reading his name in this fic, as it's mine too xDD! I never thought of nameing a male char. 'Ari', either :3 But I got used to it after a few chapters.] , aswell as the great Daimyo himself. [ And lets not forget our beloved Sho-kun <3! ]. One character, though, that I can absolutly NOT stand, would be Chinatsu. [though I beleive that's the reason of her g.] g.] What a kniving little bitch. If I had my way, the mischevious little whore would be torn apart, he remains spralled across the whole fortereP [ P [ Please forgive my gruesome fantasies x3;; I mean no offence ].
^_^; I'm so happy with thy yoy you portayed Sho-kun in his younger years. I would never had pictured him to be like that, but now that I have, I find it suits him marvelously!
Well..this is where my horrendously long review ends. [ it's shorter then i thought it would be =P I hope it was'nt too much of a pain to read!] I look impatiently forward to the next chapter [ Damn the suspence, Damn it I say! ] and be sure that I shall review every single chapter until it ends :D! [ and no, they won't be as long as this on, thank the gods. ]
Truthfulleh yours,
-Talis <3!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
( >>;; Talis's Re, pa, part 2! *was oblivious to the fact that AFF.net cut off reviews ^^; *is used to FF.net, not AFF.* )
One character, though, that I can absolutly NOT stand, would be Chinatsu. [though I beleive that's the reason of her being.] What a kniving little bitch. If I had my way, the mischevious little whore would be torn apart, he remains spralled across the whole forteress xP [ Please forgive my gruesome fantasies x3;; I mean no offence ].
^_^; I'm so happy with the way you portayed Sho-kun in his younger years. I would never had pictured him to be like that, but now that I have, I find it suits him marvelously!
Well..this is where my horrendously long review ends. [ it's shorter then i thought it would be =P I hope it was'nt too much of a pain to read!] I look impatiently forward to the next chapter [ Damn the suspence, Damn it I say! ] and be sure that I shall review every single chapter until it ends :D! [ and no, they won't be as long as this on, thank the gods. ]
Truthfulleh yours,
-Talis <3!
One character, though, that I can absolutly NOT stand, would be Chinatsu. [though I beleive that's the reason of her being.] What a kniving little bitch. If I had my way, the mischevious little whore would be torn apart, he remains spralled across the whole forteress xP [ Please forgive my gruesome fantasies x3;; I mean no offence ].
^_^; I'm so happy with the way you portayed Sho-kun in his younger years. I would never had pictured him to be like that, but now that I have, I find it suits him marvelously!
Well..this is where my horrendously long review ends. [ it's shorter then i thought it would be =P I hope it was'nt too much of a pain to read!] I look impatiently forward to the next chapter [ Damn the suspence, Damn it I say! ] and be sure that I shall review every single chapter until it ends :D! [ and no, they won't be as long as this on, thank the gods. ]
Truthfulleh yours,
-Talis <3!
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Deviantart is being a jerk, so I decided I'd review here! I finally got some time to sit down and do some reading. Your style is very good, there's enough description to really see what's going on and I am already feeling for Sesshomaru (and I'm not even a big fan of his) and I like his cousins too. Nice addition there of them. Inutaisho is a cool character too. Most of all, it just enjoyed your writing, it just flows so naturally, don't think I was pulled out once while reading it.
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story, Sesshy always was my favorite character. Iwould've reviewed before now but I just saw the story. I cna't belive no one else has reviewed yet!