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i love it! update soon!

This story is great so far I hope you keep going

Sounds like you've got the begining of a great story. seems to be a facinating new plot. cant wait to read the next chapters. Hope you update real soon.

really really cool plot its very intresting and unique please keep updating ^_^

awesome chapter! ^__^ i can't wait to see what happens next! iv'e always wondered what happened to kiade's eye. well, bye!

oooooo this is very good

Well I must say that the first chapter was wonderful. I think this story shows much promise. You explained the how's and whys perfectly so I'm not lost as to what the ceremony is for and how it works. I'm just wondering if he is in the same time period and how far away he is from home. I know that will be one of InuYasha's first goals. To escape and to get back home. I see you made "Kota" (Sota) older. I suppose that will fit since you have the classic Koga crush in this story. I like the story behind how Kaede's eye was damaged. Fits beautifully. Now my only real question that you can chose to answer (seeing as the others will be answered as you go with the story I'm guess...) Does the ceremony pick the demon that will be the most compatable for you or does it just bring one to you? Well enough rambling, I liked your story and I'll be looking for your next chapter. If you have the extra time email me when you update. I'll try my best to remember to check back for updates.

HM. Good start. Would like to see where this goes.

Love it so far! Please add more chapters ASAP! ^.^

Very Intrng. ng. Hope to read more!