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for Demon Guardians

by juanita04

person Hiei81
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up with the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ArtemisMoon
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a very promising story, so I hope you continue! I'm sure that if you get to the really *coughs* INTERESTING parts soon, I know one author who will love you forever. *points LadyCatBailey's way* So keep writing, and I'll keep reading!
person Rath Illuser
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey neat fic. Just wondering if you are going to put Naraku's Incarnations in the story. Also are we going to find that Kikyo and Inuyasha have a past relationship. Death to Kikyo!!
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm enjoying this fic greatly! i hope that u continue with it. plz update soon! i'll give u a cookie! ^o^
person Tom
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More Semper Fi
person Shadiyaray
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter sounds very interesting and I am compelled to read on. Great Ideal.
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person Shadiyaray
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Keep going.
person Zelix (Not logged on)
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i just read chapter 2, man.. this is one original fic! Good story, very good indeed... i'll read the rest now.
person Zelix (not logged on)
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that was one good chapter, this story is REALLY good... i wonder though, do you mind if i make my own version of this fic someday? Not to the letter but the same kind of theme? If you don't mind or if you do mind, send me an Email and i'll know.

Oh yes, i forgot to mention, the 'sensual' scene didn't really bother me, in fact it was kinda good. But, this is just a suggestion, you don't have to do it or anything, i'm just saying:

This may sound like bragging but... if you want to learn about some really *sweet* lemons and such, read my story "The Sinners", it's a series of AU one-shots about Inuyasha characters, they are... 'sinfully' delicious :) Oh and if you want to read about some major Drama/Angst, read my story "Loneliness of the Free Wind".

If you're offended by that... advertisement, i apologise, i'm just asking.

Well, update soon again, okay?
person Æ
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!!!!