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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have read it since when the first chapter came out. THIS story is by far THE MOST AWESOME STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!! You seace to amaze me.:) You should definetly be an author on fanfiction.net and this should be the fist story you can post. This story is rated R so you have no problem with it. AND you will have so many reviews you won't be able to count them.
YOUR FAN CHICKIE
YOUR FAN CHICKIE
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I've always believed that there was more to Naraku...but I never really explored those thoughts. ^_^x It's a nice change to read a story where he isn't a deranged megalomaniac consumed with lust, greed and an insatiable thirst for power.
I'm rather curious as to how Sesshoumaru will fit in further into the story. Again, I agree with your views on the taiyoukai. ^_^x I always thought it somewhat strange...if he truly hated Inuyasha as was implied, then why not siimply kill him? Sesshoumaru had plent of opportunity to do so, yet he refrained. Definitely left plent of room for speculation, ne?
So...Kikyou is now dead? She's fallen into the river of jyaki (or miasma or whatever its called)? This takes place after the mountain was destroyed when Naraku reformed his body after the Shichintai Arc? (Just trying to place the time frame somewhat in mnd, nd, is all. ^_~ )
Until next chapter.
^_^x
Chiruken
I'm rather curious as to how Sesshoumaru will fit in further into the story. Again, I agree with your views on the taiyoukai. ^_^x I always thought it somewhat strange...if he truly hated Inuyasha as was implied, then why not siimply kill him? Sesshoumaru had plent of opportunity to do so, yet he refrained. Definitely left plent of room for speculation, ne?
So...Kikyou is now dead? She's fallen into the river of jyaki (or miasma or whatever its called)? This takes place after the mountain was destroyed when Naraku reformed his body after the Shichintai Arc? (Just trying to place the time frame somewhat in mnd, nd, is all. ^_~ )
Until next chapter.
^_^x
Chiruken
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, absolutely fabulous story you've got here. I like the whole setup because you've given voice to everyractracter so far. Even Kikyo and Jaken! That's very good and I hope to read more. This is a GOOD story! I hope that people takticetice and give you more reviews. *shakes her fist at the lurkers*
Ciao!
Ciao!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and the Idea of Naraku and Kagome. It just seems the pairing just tugs me in. Keep up the great writing and I hope you continue this story ^__^
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW THIS IS AMAZING YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE AND SOON OK!!!!!! This is a really good story and i cant wait til you review!! :)
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is deep. Please keep writing.
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow....That was dramatic....I love it so far! Please continue! Suspense is eating away at me! hehe...Please, more!!
Luv to all Authors, FoxyOrange
Luv to all Authors, FoxyOrange
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's rare when the first chapter hooks me in, even more rare when it's the first sentance.
Beautifully done. I can not wait until you update again.
Beautifully done. I can not wait until you update again.
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good start. plz write more soon!
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg really good so far for a first chap, I tried your update notice link but it said error and all that soo I dont know If I will get any update notices but would like to I really like how this story is going so far and want to read more so I hpe you update and I hpe I cant catch it much huggles and smiles MIja...:-)