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for Divine Fallacy

by NekoYokai

person eustace
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude , man this story is what everybody would want to happen in their, its a great story keep up the good word
person Kusari_Kami
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh man. i love your story; it's beautifully written...keep it up, you're doing a wonderful job. i can't wait to see what happens next.


cheers.
person drake220
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...inu got branded!!! thats hysterical!
person Mija
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg another wonderfull and funny chapter soo good and soo glad to see an update...*shrugs shoulders and looks sheepish* ya I know I know Im not good at updating my own fics so I have no right to harass other writers...sigh but its sooooo good and me wants more please??? if possible?? will give ya a cookie??? hehyhowyhow again wonderfull chap the story is going along soo well and I cant wait to see where it will lead, ya know all us gals always fall for the bad guys lol, till next update be safe well and happy much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person snowfall
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for making me laugh, Neko. I look forward to the next chapter. Not much on words today, but you write well.
person leafe-chan (nsi-not signed in yet)
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot :) Loves it! *takes your hands and dances with you*
Update n mmn mmmk? *grin*
person Kat
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good writing. I like where this story is going. Please continue!
person WhisperingMoon
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. I always like stories with Inuyasha being an asshole and then falling inlove with Kagome. Those are the funniest.
person Mija
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was hilarious, I cant wait for the next run in with Kag and Inu and when will they finally meet formaly? cant wait hehe much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)