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for Divine Fallacy

by NekoYokai

person m
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story..please update soon!
person Gyousei
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story sounds really good!!! t wat wait til you update!!!
person Temptress_of_Seduction
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwww.....................come on! i wanna read more!
person ZoZe
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story very much!
I love the sarcasm and the funny wordings you put in there.
I can't wait to read the next chapter! It's 27th, so where is it?!
Greetings
ZoZe
person Buyo
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great! It kicks ass! ... Even though it only has 2 chapters ... Buyo got a little over-excited ... I hope you write more soon 'cause Buyo can't wait to read it! **Buyo**
person Buyo
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, forgot to say something! ^^ Please e-mail me when you update! Huggles! **Buyo**
person miakachan
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic so far! Keep updating! Btw, I'm curious, how'd you come up with the title? It reminds me of D's "'s "Divine Comedy"...if you have no idea what I'm blathering about then ignore that part...^_^
person Black_Cat03
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was funny! I love how Kagome and Inuyasha keep on bubmping into each other. Update soon. And thanks for your review for my story. Bye!
person szmadad
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your last chapter had me laughing! You did a great job of combining humor with character development -- poor Inu has been "branded" by Kagome already..hehe..wonder how long it will be before the two recognize the attraction they have for one another. I'm guessing there's a lot more fun stuff to get through before then.
Please, I beg of you, don't let there be a Kikyo triangle. I can accept her as Inu's vain, selfish ex who cheated on him...and it seems like you're letting him have enough intelligence to be over her. I mean, its ok for him to react to her ...he was with her for a while and she cheated on him! But please don't let him be dumb enough to want to get back together with her...
Ahh..and poor maligned Hojo..poor Kags should ditch him and head home with the hot and furious waiter -...heheh.

Looking forward to your next update.
person Platinum
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow was that a really interesting chappieZ UPZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!! I reallly want to know whats going to happen, though i have an idea......i really thouhgt the date was going to be Inu but good job making it more unique then immedy pay pairing them. UPDATE SOON!!!