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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you don't continue with this fic, I will be most sad :0( You must continue please! I beg of you ~gets down on hands and knees~ please! Alot of authors do this. They start a story, I get into it and then they decide they don't want to continue for whatever reason and leave me and the many other of their fans hanging. It makes me want to cry. Do you not love us enough to continue writing. I will bake you cookies and cakes and all sorts of goodies if you continue this fic. Ppppllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeee!!!!! This fic is really awsome and I want to know what happens!!!!!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you have done really well on this whole fic. I'm really excited about it cont. Chapter three was good stuff to I'm looking foward to chapter four! keep it up!
~Serena
~Serena
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't think you should stop writing this story. Though, kind of cliche-ish, you have a really great writing style that could even pull off the much despised OC-ness that seems to be making it's way into EVERY IY fic. . . .can you tell I'm not a fan. Anyway, I hope you continue your story and maybe if your losing focus just remember, everyone loves (well, mostly everyone) Kag/Inu scenes. Just show them more taking an interest in each other rather than having them argue every time they meet. But then again, they say the best sex happens when your angry. . .*hint hint*
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update sooner. i like it though
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was sort of losing interest by the second chapter, but the third chapter was excellent. ^_^ I love your writing style--its brilliant! And damn that Kikyou for being such a slut...grrr...but still, if she didn't break Inuyasha's heart, then he would've never met Kagome, then...I guess. And I love the way you describe Hojou's density, LMAO! "No, our boy Hojo here couldn't find sand if he was lost in the desert." Haha, it's perfect! It's the same exact Hojou from the actual series, as we can see. -.-;; I like the way he goes all A.D.D. on Kagome, and vice versa. Keep going! This is a fantastic story! ^_^
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you finally posted the friggin' chapter! I haven't read it, but was about ten Ien I saw what you said to me. You wanna know why I said that? It's really freakish. I had this two part dream one night. The first part was where I was in my parents car, and then I hear this voice from the backseat. I turn around, ( are yoady ady for it? ) and there's this squirrel wearing this mini Terminator suit, holding a mini rifle.Then it started talking. I can't remember what it said, but I know it was something threatning. But I remember it's voice. It sounded like it was full of helium. Then that part ended. Part two, I remember standing in my front yard. I turn around, and t's t's this sqirrel, staring at me. Then suddenly It's eyes started to glow red. Then it launched, and I mean LAUNCHED at me, like a rocket. IT ATTACKED ME!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then I felt other squirrels biting me! I collapsed and then I woke up. Turns out I had fallen out of my bed.( O_o ) Yeesh. Well, I hope you now know why EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! *cough* Okay, I really hope that made you laugh! I know I sure did! ~_^ PLEASE tell my somehow if you did or didn't laugh a this. I plan on visiting my sick cousin, and telling her that story. She's not a stiff, but she doesn't laugh a lot. The weird thing? The squirell dream is a true story! BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.- GO CHIPMUNKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.- GO CHIPMUNKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed so long and so hard at that chappie, I nearly fell off my chair. Especially the Hojo and Caramilk part! OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH,Inu-Yasha's gonna get it when Kagome finds him, isn't he? YIPPEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Personally, I like it when Kagome kicks Inu's sorry ass. As for the chappie in general, THUMBS WAY WAY WAY UUUUUUPPPPPPP DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!
P.S.- EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS STILL MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.2.-Pickles, and goodnight Las Vegas!!!!
P.S.- EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS STILL MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.2.-Pickles, and goodnight Las Vegas!!!!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its great so update
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Story's GREAT so far! You must update! *thrusts fist up into the air* sorry *cough*. Anyway, in your message saying you would update soon, I started laughing so hard at the words,"Neko will go snooze," and I don't know why. I know you don't need to know all of this, but for some reason I just had to tell you. And I like to annoy people. BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! Spud must go now. My daddy, whom I nicknamed Butter-Brains, (Don't ask...*shakes head*.. too long a story) is coming. Spud must say Pickles, and Goodnight Las Vegas! ( and no, I don't live there )
P.S.- EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (0_0)
P.S.- EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (0_0)
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're going to kill meeee!!
Every day I visit this site just to see if you have updated yet! But... nothing!
I feel myself in a current lack of IY-Fanfics! Argh....
Every day I visit this site just to see if you have updated yet! But... nothing!
I feel myself in a current lack of IY-Fanfics! Argh....