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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is great!so please update soon!thanks!
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO! NO! there is absolutely nothing wrong with chapter 3 or any others. You did a great job there, I particularly enjoyed the piece of explanation of Inuyasha's past lifestyle ( don't know whether to sympathise him or call him an idiot). Though the way he's treating Kagome now is really making me wish he did die on drugs!
Please PLease update!!!
Please PLease update!!!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I have this story bookmarked! You MUST finish it now! I like it so far and I am looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon! Please!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!! It's the best AU InuYasha fanfic I've ever read & I check it every day for updates. I love it!! It's really funny, & you're doing a really great job, so please don't stop. Um... yeah. Bye.
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLHAO! LOL! This is great so far! I can't wait to see your new chapter 3 even though I never got to see it, I bet its going to be as good as the first two, though don't make us wait too long! I'll die if I have to.... X.x Heh heh...Anyhoo, very good, you had some spelling errors but nothing that out and out bothers me, just be a bit more watchful in the future...What a pair Kagome and Inuyasha make... :- ) Until next time! ^_^
* continues to howl with laughter *
* continues to howl with laughter *
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*endless laughter* I'm... I'm sorry... I know it's more of a sad story... *giggle* but it was just hilarious! I have to laugh! It actually chased you? Oh my god! And it hissed! *snort* Anyway, you don't have to read if you don't want to, but I'm going to tell you of the 'Newspaper Incident.' So anyway, my dad walks into the kitchen and playfully asks if I got the paper for him. I say no and go get it, even though he was kidding. I open the door. Then before I can even get the paper I notice movement in the corner of the small patio we have. I glanp, ip, intrigued, and in the amount of time the thing gets from there to the placemat, (wich is about a foot away from the door [wind]) I realize three facts: 1) It's a full grown raccoon 2) It's almost right in front of my door, wich isn't normal, and 3) It's foaming at the mouth. Immediately I backtrack to the 3rd fact again, and start to panic. So I slam the door in the poor, rabid thing's face, and scream, "MOM! THERE'S A RABID RACCOON OUTSIDE THE DOOR THAT'S COME TO KILL US ALL AND STEAL ALL OUR CHEESE!" (I actually did say that, I was going through a phase) My mom and dad, as soon as soon as they looked through the window to see for themselves, called the exterminator. My mom and me went through the garage door to get to the car so she could take me to school. (I was ten) I come home later to find the raccoon was gone. I was kind of sad to tell the truth. Poor guy... girl... animal...Yeah. At least it was put out of its misery.
So anyway, thanks for telling me you laughed! Appreciate it! Now I can tell my cousin that story, and hopefully she'll get better. She's actually getting worse.:( Sadness. If it's not too much trouble, could you tell me if you laughed at this one too? It's for a different reason, but it's too long. But if do ddo decide to answer me, you could e-mail me at: toodles@rogers.com (toodles: another phase) or you could do like you did this time. If you do decide to e-mail me, only do it once. My dad checks my e-mails for hate-mail. -_O Urgh. If he found your e-mail, I'd have to explain who you were, and how I know you. Then he'd find out about AFF... I'd be banned from being in the same room with a computer for all eternity. O.O NO!! That must not happen!
Anyway, bye-bye! For now... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.- Evil killer squirrels AND evil killer raccoons must die!!!!!!
So anyway, thanks for telling me you laughed! Appreciate it! Now I can tell my cousin that story, and hopefully she'll get better. She's actually getting worse.:( Sadness. If it's not too much trouble, could you tell me if you laughed at this one too? It's for a different reason, but it's too long. But if do ddo decide to answer me, you could e-mail me at: toodles@rogers.com (toodles: another phase) or you could do like you did this time. If you do decide to e-mail me, only do it once. My dad checks my e-mails for hate-mail. -_O Urgh. If he found your e-mail, I'd have to explain who you were, and how I know you. Then he'd find out about AFF... I'd be banned from being in the same room with a computer for all eternity. O.O NO!! That must not happen!
Anyway, bye-bye! For now... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.- Evil killer squirrels AND evil killer raccoons must die!!!!!!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read the top paragraph in your A/N. You didn't screw up. The chappie was perfectly fine. I liked it. You made Fluffy nice, but strict. I like that! The chap wasn't even confusing. At least not for me.
Spud must now go and eat slop that mommy Spud calls dinner. She actually calls squid and rice DINNER!! I know what you're thinking. Squid and rice? What the hell!? -_O
I know! It's abuse I tell you! ABUSE!!! She's trying to poison me, and coverig ig it up by saying 'I'm trying something new!'
Well guess WHAT ma!? I'm on to you! I WILL get my revenge!! And I- wait... did I just say all that out loud? hehehe...
Anyway, update as SOON as you can! Buh-bye!!
P.S.-DOWN WITH EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS AND RACCOONS!!! (you do realize that I'll never let that go, right?)
Spud must now go and eat slop that mommy Spud calls dinner. She actually calls squid and rice DINNER!! I know what you're thinking. Squid and rice? What the hell!? -_O
I know! It's abuse I tell you! ABUSE!!! She's trying to poison me, and coverig ig it up by saying 'I'm trying something new!'
Well guess WHAT ma!? I'm on to you! I WILL get my revenge!! And I- wait... did I just say all that out loud? hehehe...
Anyway, update as SOON as you can! Buh-bye!!
P.S.-DOWN WITH EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS AND RACCOONS!!! (you do realize that I'll never let that go, right?)
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. I'll shut up after this. Promise. If you end up telling me if raccoon story was funny or not, DON'T E-MAIL ME!!! Somethingrongrong with it. That's all I have to say. Bye.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue getting very good and very nicely writen well later hope to see more soon.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Y'know, I'm sorry...I had read the update and didn't leave a review this time just cuz I didn't think I had anything new to say other than I hope you update soon.
Actually, the last line - where Kagome realizes that Inu has walked away with her purse made me laugh out loud. That was not something I expected.
And you gave some interesting details on Inuyasha's life...former drug addict who was used by kikyo and obviously made some very bad choices and hung out with the wrong people.
I DO hope you continue with this fic b/c as with any Inu-Kag story, I'm dying to read how they actually get together. Right now Inu is the one with the attitude that needs to change - he's been insulting Kagome at every turn...rather extreme behavior too. So of course, I'm interested in seeing how he could possibly shift gears to actually be a little nice to her...
So please DO continue..don't drop this story so soon!
:)
Actually, the last line - where Kagome realizes that Inu has walked away with her purse made me laugh out loud. That was not something I expected.
And you gave some interesting details on Inuyasha's life...former drug addict who was used by kikyo and obviously made some very bad choices and hung out with the wrong people.
I DO hope you continue with this fic b/c as with any Inu-Kag story, I'm dying to read how they actually get together. Right now Inu is the one with the attitude that needs to change - he's been insulting Kagome at every turn...rather extreme behavior too. So of course, I'm interested in seeing how he could possibly shift gears to actually be a little nice to her...
So please DO continue..don't drop this story so soon!
:)