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for Divine Fallacy

by NekoYokai

person Lady in Red
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw man i wanted to see how it ended!
person Hanyou Slave
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is great and really wish you would continue. I have been waiting for some time.
person Mia
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE! PLEASE! Write more!!!!! @_@
person Chibi_Ninja-Chan
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...
Of course you have to continue this...
It's so well written and good and interesting. I don't usually like these AU type deals, but this is great. You've converted me...
Haha, I love the relationship set-up you've got here. Like, the feisty fighting kind always make for the best lemons.
It's the truth...

Please don't leave me hanging. :*(
person Mia
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It's very well written! I wish you would write more of it!
person Sepia
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue this! You HAVE to.

I'll tell you why.

I liked this story so much, but for some dumb reason i couldn't remember the title if my LIFE depended on it. So I literally sat here one day through about 19 pages of fics trying to find it! And I finally did. I really think this is well written and the story is great. I wanted to finish it really badly. So please, do continue!
person Serena
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writig on this fic!!! I really love it the idea is way awsome I would hate to see you just stop. please keep it up.
person psycho
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes move on. it is a good story, but it is irritating leaving little notes like these behind. grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. update, :)

p.s. i still love ya though
person Sorena
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this fic! I can't describe how disappointed I was when I finished reading chapter 3! A hiatus? Are you kidding? I've read SO many fics and this is probably one of my favourites, no joke! I love the characters, the storyline, and your style of writing. How can I convince you that this fic is great and you must continue? I don't know...but please do...this story has so much potential....so please try to continue.
:)
person roguedork
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when u make from asshole overover , dont turn him into such a wuss, like those other stories
gods if hes and ass he shou jus just have an alter ego and hav have split personalithes just dont make him a wuss add in that extra gruffness, lol ( funny word )