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by FaTaLfURy

person narea(not logged in)
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i adore this story. Im really glad you updated this too, it made my day ^_^ I hope this review will help movtivate you to write more. Looking forward to future updates. Keep up the good work!
person Keiko
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was some intense shit. i wanna see what happens afterward
person VeRoN(nsi)
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE F-?????? NOOoooo, you could have not possibly left it there!! How could you???? Ohhh, poor Kagome...Damn Inuyasha! All men are the same... One doubt I have though that keeps nagging me is: How will Kagome ever trust in Inuyasha? Knowing that he supposedly loves Kikyo and did that with her...I don't know...is it just me?Cause I would find it really hard to trust a man who says loves another and then makes love to me...And I don't believe for a second that he thought Kagome was Kikyo, you know there is no worst blind that the one who doesn't want to see. Ahh, okay I went completely off tracks, anyway, great chappie!!!Loved the sex!!(lol)
Update soon please!!!!!!!
person catt
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD NO!!!! HOW COULD HE?!?!?!?! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. I love ur story, but, but that, how could he say kikyo's name and not her's? Oh my god. Please tell me something will turn out ok?? UPDATE!!!!!
person foxfire730
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just had to be a pro writer and leave a cliff hanger!! UGH!!!! Oh well (^_^) UPDATE SOOONNNN!!!! (inuyasha will know that it was really kagome right? right!?!? PLEASE BE YES!!!)
person Lina
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww I feel loved. And this was freaking awesome please keep up the great work and I can't wait till the next chapter is out. One of these days I'll load up my stories.
person There\'s a weird blue figure in my backyard
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! I really --and I mean really REALLY! -- like your story! It's aaaaaaawesome!!! But-- doesn't it get strenuous to write in this style all the time? I mean, you always have to be all polite and snobbish (even if the meaning of some phrases might not be all that polite...*grin*), and you can't let out some fucking bad language (tehehe)...
Oh, I see, I'm losing track. Anyway, keep writing, will ya? You'll have me as your faithful reader for sure! ^^ Even though I feel a little sorry for poor Kikyo, considering she most likely will have to suffer A LOT in the future. But, on the other hand, it pains me to see Inu and Kags not together, even more so when our beloved "Lord Grey" always confirms he loves his "Lady Winter" with all his heart and for all eternity (*sob*), so my pity for Kikyo could be worse, actually.
Okay, I'm rambling *AGAIN*, so I'd better stop now, ne? ^^ So just keep writing writing writing! *big fat scary smileyface*
person VeRoN(nsi)
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Finally you updated!!!!!! I have been waiting for your update for so long!!!! Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait to see how Inuyasha and Kagome are goin gto react when they wake up in the morning, and if my assumtions are correct, together and naked in bed(lol). Though I have to say, I feel sorry for Kikyo... Oh well, never mind. Update ASAP!!!!!!

VeRoN.
person Firefrost
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, there! I really like this so far, but I have a bit of a problem in regards to Inuyasha, which I'm not sure if you've fixed in the later chapters. Inuyasha wouldn't call Kagome "Mistress": it's degrading to his authority, being a duke as well as not being her lover. He would refer to her as "My lady," instead. And that same title goes for servants; they would never call their lord or lady "mistress" or "master"
person Lina
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must read more of this wonderful story. Please don't stop I've missed your writing.