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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I noticed an error in your first chapter. A noble with the social rank of Duke is referred to by others using the title "Your Grace" or 'his Grace' etc., never 'Lord' as with other ranks, since the Dukedom is the highest noble rank below the royal family. That was the only thing that irked me; other than that it was good.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv the new chappy! update soon =^-^=
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you updated! *cheers* Good thing Inuyasha finally opens his eyes and realizes that Kagome is indeed a beautiful young woman instead of an insolent little girl like he seemed to believe. I can't wait to see what happens on their wedding night! Will Kagome's body betray her, and will she shove that part away and threaten him with castration or worse if he ever comes near her (on 2nd thought, somehow I don't think Kagome would be willing to give up the pleasure that would be lost if she did castrate him... heh heh)? Nice portrait of Rin, she reminds of a mother hen, so happily to jump to conclusions and estatic as the thought of Kagome finally marrying. You need to update!
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter!!!!! Can't wait to know what happens next! So anyway, I'm not fan of Woodiwiss either but you reminded me of her style of writing. I'm too am a fan of Julie Garwood...Anyhow, update soon! Don't let us waiting for too long!
Love n' kisses, VeRoN
Love n' kisses, VeRoN
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! you finally updated! this chapter is really good! good job! plz try and make the chapters longer! lov ya! and plz update soon!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! good plot so far! cant wait for kag and inu;s wedding night! lol! i sure hope u find the time to update soon! luve you lots!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! good plot so far! cant wait for kag and inu;s wedding night! lol! i sure hope u find the time to update soon! luve you lots!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One hell of a fan fic I must say. I love it. So glad to hear your back. I am working on a story is is posted hopefully, the title is sakura. But because I can't sign in again for one reason I have to start over again, but not till I have most of the story done. Once again thanks for keeping up the great work.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus I don't know if I should be happy for kagome that they're getting together or sorry. LOL GREAT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!Update!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story. I totaly love it!!! you are way creative and talented. please update again soon.