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by FaTaLfURy

person Sama
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well you probably would remember me from this site with another name but I'm keeping it secret since I'm starting over you know? Anyway I loved this chapter! I'm curious as to what the heck is going on between miroku and kagome? Why would he purpose to her like that? Inuyasha is so mean though!!! Lock her up in a tower....You gotta promise you won't do that because I'll die of laughter if you do. HAHAHAHAHA. I feel so bads for them...I can see a lot...lot of angst going to happen in this story alone. Its just a gut feeling. Please update soon!!! Tttul!
person Dee Nekura
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I do hope you update soon. This is an amazing story so far, and I love what you've done with all the characters. ;-; where is little Shippou though? *sob* Anyway, I love it and i hope to read more soon!
person amhor56
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Yes! New chapter out, and it was so soon too. I loved it. I can't believe that Miroku asked for Kagome's hand in marrige! I was just about to die in my seat. But thank God that Kagome was being a good little girl and she said "I do". Very excellent chapter and I want to thank you and your muse for putting out a brilliant chapter! Update soon and thanks for your love. I love ya too!
person chanda
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey you... I was shocked to see an update... I'm not mad at all... just glad to see you writing again. I do hope you update soon. I read the last to chapters and they were great. I loved the cliffy.


Chanda

person I Queen Of Frozen Hearts
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHhh, really good... Great job...

Please Update Soon...

You Rock ☻☻☻
person I Queen Of Frozen Hearts
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work... (awsome:) also I aint saying this because I'm a meany but I didn't like much the thought of Kikyou been a goody goody. Besides that, I totaly loved the story nice plot, and I gatta tell ya that you have really good writting skills...

WELL, I'll be checking to see if you have updated.
PLEASE herry with it okokok,
Update As Soon As You can...

You Rock ☻
person tornadotrail
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ir's been a long time, welcome back! I feel so bad for Kagome, I hope she manages to escape to America. Then Inuyasha would have to follow her, and oh boy, that would really be a blow to his pride.To have her escape him.
person amhor56
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear God! Happy and relieved that you came back! I thought you would abandon this story and I was really sad and frustrated. But you didn't! And that's very good! Oh I'm glad you liked my word! Hehe! Well very nice chapter, as expected! I can not wait 'till you update. Hopefully later on Inuyasha realizes what they could have! And is Kagome really pregnant? Ohhh! The suspense is killing me! I hope yo u update soon! Thanks!
person Sutlesarcasm
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is so good to see your voice again. I figured if I waited long enough, your life would ease up and you would have a chance to update. I was raised on Regency Romances in the style of Georgette Heyer, and LOVE smart, spirited leading ladies, and strong, smart, dominant heros. You got both to work with here, and I really am enjoying this story.
person goldey
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my god. i love it. all i have to say is UPDATE!