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I absolutely love this story :) I am so glad that Shuzu-chan recomended it in her story on mediaminer ^_^ Please update soon, I can't wait for the wedding night ^_^

omg...pls update soon!!! n wat the hell is inuyasha thinking of doing dat to kagome? i thought he wants her...

Okay...I hope you update soon.(cause its a awesome story, i find it hard to find stories like this) I hate nice Kikyo's but, that's only cause i hate her.LOL. I love that Inuyasha and Kagome have this spark but, don't even really notice it. Making it almost kinda possible for them to fall for each other faster. Like Kagome's a fire Kikyo couldn't bring out in Inuyasha! Making it funny and cute when they start fighting! So i really hope you update soon because i'm dieing!!!!

good story, like how you had Miroku challange Inuyasha. tho we all know who would win. like the story alot.

i really like your story so far. the only thing i might sugest is that you stay in the past tense. you keep switching from past to present and i find that stories written in the present tense sound funny in my head! of course that is just my opinion, so feel free to ignore it if you like it. to be grammatically correct, you could get by with present tense, so long as you stay in present tense. the switching is one of my pet peeves, so if you find you would like to have it fixed, i would be more than happy to help! i actually enjoy being a beta. i do like your story so far though and i'm only on the second chapter!

You have absolutely no idea how glad I am to see that you've updated, especially after such an incredibly hard final... I was in tears... Anyway, I just wanted to say that you've impeciable timing, and I'm delighted to see that you haven't abandoned this story... I was so afraid you had! And I adore that last chapter. How sweet of Kagome to stop a duel... and Miroku offering for her hand and his total arrogance stating that Kagome would prefer him... I choked on that. And Inuyasha's possessiveness just made me melt... Well, I certainly hope the next update won't take so long! Do you by any chance have a mailing list that I could sign up to in order to receive e-mails whenver you update? Thank you for updating1

i love this chapter. perfect cliffy. i cant wait to see how the marriage works out.

Heh, I loved this wedding chapter. Though the wedding lacked in romance it certainly made up for it in sheer entertainment. Barely avoided a duel no less! The part about Inuyasha locking Kagome in a tower and forgetting about her seems a little unlikely. He wouldn’t have been so riled up if he could honestly just forget about her. I can’t wait to see what happens now that they are married. Can’t wait to read more!

CONTINUE!!!!! Please. I wannna know what happens next! And if you wanna know, I don't think it's long enough. j/k iy's good, and I can't wait till the update. Please hurry or I'll go mad. I'll be waiting.

please update soon