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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heh inu's being a bastard, poor kags needs to step it up lol i really like this plz update soon!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i lreally like this story I am just glad that kagome did not go through with stealing
Please could u writr the next chapter I really got to know who will win the company
Please could u writr the next chapter I really got to know who will win the company
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon. Because with Inuyasha around Kagome it's begining to seem like, "Hojo who?".
Hopefully that made sense. Your story is just too captivating. I'm curious to find out what's next to come!!!!
Hopefully that made sense. Your story is just too captivating. I'm curious to find out what's next to come!!!!
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I hope you get your 10 reviews, I'm dying to know what happens next.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PG13? Is that even allowed here? =P
Very good spelling and grammar! Har har, you captured my attention with your writing style. ^^
I can't wait until things start spicing up between the two!
Very good spelling and grammar! Har har, you captured my attention with your writing style. ^^
I can't wait until things start spicing up between the two!
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story. :D
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I just found this story. It's really good. Keep writinge fie first chapter was a bit slow but the second was better.
Personally, though, asking for reviews in exchange for updates is not a good idea. For one, few readers like being hounded like that. Also, in my stories, I normally start my stories with 8 reviews /chapter, but after awhile it becomes about 20 /chapter. You might want to wait a little.
That's just my opinion.
I just found this story. It's really good. Keep writinge fie first chapter was a bit slow but the second was better.
Personally, though, asking for reviews in exchange for updates is not a good idea. For one, few readers like being hounded like that. Also, in my stories, I normally start my stories with 8 reviews /chapter, but after awhile it becomes about 20 /chapter. You might want to wait a little.
That's just my opinion.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh, out of most fan fics ive read i havent quite seen one like this. i really think ill enjoy this one
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story and how you didn't start it off with kagome hagning all over inuyasha like most stories. thats why sometimes i don't like inu/kag stoies. neway, keep updating, i wanna see what happens next!! ^-^*
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Update soon please.